Reviewer: TerryLarka Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2023 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

You did a great job emulating the game's storytelling through your narrative structure. That alone had me hooked on this story, but you also nailed the game's writing style. I could effortlessly hear the narrator and Shadowheart's voice speaking their dialogue, and it perfectly matched the lyrical and witty style of the game's descriptions. Also loved the use of the illithid powers, giving Kada and Shadowheart a glimpse of each other's perspective of the other. That's an element from the game that was executed so perfectly in a size scenario like this.

Beyond that, this was also solid size lit with a short, fun plot. I'm always happy to see more giantess Shadowheart. Great work! 

Author's Response:

Tyty, I'm very glad you liked it. It was a unique little experiment, but seems like it paid off.