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Date: October 02 2023 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 6

Okay very well written taking the reader on a journey through the sensations poor Rick was forced to endure. Looking forward to the next chapter in this world we have found ourselves lurking through. 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much :D

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Date: October 01 2023 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 4

Okay now the implications are coming around it seems we are going to be taken on a journey through this new world with monstrously large predators with a fascination for tickling. Interesting concept and I haven't read any other stories out there like this. It has peaked my interest though. This could be an interesting ride.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!!! I do always try to make my stories unique, I don't want to retread over things that people have done before, or step on any toes in the process. 

I'm about to upload some new chapters of this story so I hope you enjoy them <3

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Date: October 01 2023 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting story so far. Good world building and giving us an image of the dystopian world Rick lives in. Looking forward to reading the next chapters.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I do want to try to expand on the world building more Most arcs of this story will result in boy gets caught by monstergirl, monstergirl sex ensues, so world building is going to be quite passive where it happens. 

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