[Report This]Date: September 29 2023 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome story! I loved the strange relationship dynamic these two had going and how you bamboozled the reader by giving them Astera's incorrect perspective at the beginning. The story itself was equal parts sexy and humorous, and I appreciate how well you balanced and exceled at both aspects.
All the references to Greek myth were cool and clever. Laodocus forgetting his name (or at least, Astera convincing herself of that) with Astera refusing to remind him was a fun twist on Odysseus tricking Polyphemus by calling himself "Nobody." And shoutouts to Lesbos and its open minded clerics lol.
Author's Response:
Hahaha, I'm glad all that time I spent reading Homer in school was finally put to good use! I actually considered having Astera call Laodocus "Nobody", but I didn't want the whole story to turn into an Abbott & Costello routine.
[Report This]Date: September 28 2023 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved this one, the fake out at the beginning was a nice twist, and the idea that the Cyclops has basically been tricked into fulfilling her victim's fantasies is hilarious. The ending is nice too, I like happily ever afters.
Author's Response:
That means a lot coming from one of my favorite writers on here! Thanks greenanon, looking forward to more of your brilliant stories.
Date: September 27 2023 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story, it was surprisingly wholesome. I enjoyed the dynamic in which Tera enjoyed dominating while also feeling love for Laodocus and likewise, him secretly enjoying the "torture".
The foot scenes were nice as well, and I look forward to seeing more stories from you. Do you think we could see orc girls in the future?
Author's Response:
Hmmm, an orc girl is an interesting idea. Usually they're not big enough for me – although maybe one could grow bigger...?
Date: September 27 2023 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Damn this was good. I know this was a oneshot but I really would like more.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm not sure what other stories I could tell with Laodocus and Astera, but I might do a spiritual sequel one day.
[Report This]Date: September 27 2023 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Your story is full of grammatical errors. You often write "her" instead of "him" and visa-versa. That said, what an incredible, fantastic story. I'm so glad I read it, and am looking forward to more of your work. WELL DONE!
This is the classic topping from the bottom relationship. The fact Astera has absolute physical power over Laodocus, yet he manipulates her mentally and emotionally, is nicely played out in your story.
I especially like the references of Astera having kept Laodocus between both her breasts and in her ass-crack in the past. I'm not into one eyed women {though Daryl Hannah in "Kill Bill" would be an exception} yet you made Astera a babe I definitely am into.
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks for catching the his/her stuff! I always make sure to proofread but inevitably there's some stuff my eye skips over.
And I'm glad you enjoyed it! If you couldn't tell from my penname, Astera probably isn't the last monster gal I'll write.