[Report This]Date: November 20 2023 8:18 PM Title: Helpful Assistant
I'm really loving the different dynamics between the bigs and tinies each chapter. It's all very playful, and there's this underlying energy of everyone being into the power dynamic even if they won't openly admit it.
The prank chapter was a lot of fun, especially them getting caught by HR and her being secretly into it. The description of Jennifer sitting on him was really good too. I think the brevity of it was to it's favor, just a short and sweet episode in the office.
Chapter 4 was good too. It was cool seeing how Sasha and Marcus both depend on each other. I love Marcus' enthusiasm for fulfilling his duties as operations assistant/stress relief/ fidget toy, as well as how considerate Sasha is in juxtaposition to how she physically treats him, which just loops back to my praise regarding the office dynamic.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the praise!
That's what I'm going for, little slice of life stories with bigs and tinies working together with a fun power dynamic that's enjoyed, rather than feared by those within it. Cute giant office ladies treating their tiny coworkers both as toys and as reliable coworkers, bosses, subordinates and friends. I appreciate the feedback and I hope to do more with these characters because I really like them.
Next chapter should be really fun so I hope you enjoy!
Date: October 15 2023 11:24 AM Title: Classic Prank
I’m loving the office style stories. I know you’ve said this one was on the shorter side, but I do think just a little more description on all of your stories would have them shine a bit brighter. Other than that, this is a great little story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback and I will definitely try to add more descriptions to subsequent chapters and my other works!
I appreciate the love
[Report This]Date: October 02 2023 8:38 PM Title: The Secretary
I love the idea of a giant woman struggling to get noticed by her tiny boss. This chapter was very cute, and unexpected. The first chapter gave the impression of the women all acting domineering towards the tinies, but it's fun seeing different dynamics throughout the office. And the description of the butt was very good.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I really want to capture a wide variety of interaction types, from more teasing and domineering to more equal ones like I did here!
So glad you liked the butt! Descriptions are always a blast to write and really helps to drive home the sheer size and scale of the butt, so I'm glad it was appreciated.
Stay tuned for more and thanks for reading!