Reviewer: Odysseus Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2023 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing so far! I hope that some of the girls use tiny people as jewelry, toe rings, piercings, etc. And I hope someone ends up in a girl's butt at some point.

Also, you have two instances of the word "placeholder" in the story that I assume you meant to replace.

Author's Response:

wow, can't believe I didn't catch that 😅 I think I need to have a serious talk with my proofreader, and I'll bring a shrink ray :P


The tinies here are a bit too big for toe-rings, but they'll certainly be used as jewelry and piercings.

Reviewer: Randomer000 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2023 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Brilliant start to the story, mate! Slickly written and keeping a nice pace throughout.

Courtney already seems like such an incessant brat, and I'm sure her shrinking only the start of her problems. Especially if her friend was supposed to be dropping by, and even more so if that friend treats tinies remotely similarly to the way she does...

And I can't help feel sorry for the tiny electrician in her slides - I'll bet he's going to be so lonely without her sweaty toes to keep him company!