[Report This]Date: October 28 2023 5:27 AM Title: Interlude - Sarah
This story is phenomenal. The most enticing one I have read in the genre for ages!
Author's Response:
OMG, Scrumptious commented on my story!? Bro, you know how much I love your short story Begging? I've read that story countless times throughout the years. The story hits the right buttons. I'm so happy to receive a comment from you, and a positive one at that. Thank you so much, and I hope you like future chapters!
Date: October 13 2023 9:36 PM Title: The Miracle, the Mistrust, and the Monarch
Looks like Jennifer took revenge for nothing! I'm so happy Sarah is alive! And, I never knew there were creatures smaller than Lilliputians.
Poor Jenny. All those deaths, all because of a simple misunderstanding. Lilliputians thought they were the giants the money were evil, and was brutal to them. Her thinking they are just evil, took revenge. An unnecessary circle of hatred.
Author's Response:
yuuuuup, you got it. All unnecessary death because of misunderstandings. Lilliputians think giants are evil, Jen thinks Lilliputians are evil. Lots of unnecessary violence. Thanks for your comment! I appreciate it!
Date: October 06 2023 3:33 PM Title: The Experiment
I love this book... can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: October 01 2023 11:48 PM Title: Verdant Vale
Omg I was so scared for Kara and Liam and big fat dumbA$$ at the end but hey at least he gave a chance for communication between the two sides now but I doubt that will stop the violence and destruction for now but it a start overall great chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: September 26 2023 10:16 AM Title: The Queen
It's been a while since a quality story turns up on here. I can't express my excitement about it, such a wonderful story so far. You got me really hooked
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words! I appreciate it. I hope you like the newest chapter and the direction the story is going.
[Report This]Date: September 25 2023 4:15 AM Title: The Experiment
I’ve never written a review on a story before, but I found yours so interesting that I just had to. While I’ve read several other Gulivera-type stories, I think yours takes the cake! The explanations for the way Kara acts are incredibly realistic which I appreciate. I find this story so interesting and I’m highly looking forward to your future chapters.
Author's Response: I cannot stress how inspirational your words are, and how deeply moved I am. I'm incredibly flattered that my story got you to write a review :). It truly gives me the motivation to keep writing knowing that other are reading and enjoying it. Thank you for your support and stay tuned for more!
[Report This]Date: September 17 2023 5:32 AM Title: Kara
Another good chapter! I’m glad to hear that this is going to be a long story. Hopefully you finish it.To see a good story be abandoned at a random point would be a bummer. If reviews serve as a good motivation, prepare to see me comment often then lol. Unless you got discord and I could talk in greater detail there.
Seems Kara is being set up to be the potential representative for the lillis when she encounters Jennifer. Interesting. I’m glad we got to see some lilli pov and not just Jennifer simply eating for multiple chapters (at least I hope not.) don’t get me wrong, Jennifer showing off her power is sweet but would definitely love her trying to interact with the tiny people or focusing on main mission of finding her friends.
Thanks again for another great chapter. Looking forward for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the comment/review! It certainly helps a lot with motivation to write. I don't have discord for size things right now, but that may change. Without trying to spoil anything, Jennifer won't be a mindless eating machine, and stuff will change around. However, vore is my kink, and well, it's gonna be around a lot more :P But anyway, I feel like I just started writing, there's a lot to explore here including the fates of the other scientists.
[Report This]Date: September 17 2023 3:20 AM Title: Kara
Damn it just got a whole lot better with this chapter I already love Kara as a character and now we know giants where here before but surprisingly they were smaller and Jen becoming least forgiving each time is great 👍 nice job dude
Author's Response:
Thank you for your continued support! :D
Date: September 17 2023 2:48 AM Title: Vengeance Unleashed
I apologize in advance for the inconsequential review.
I just stopped by to say this story has caught my attention and I will be watching for it in the future with great interest. :)
[Report This]Date: September 16 2023 5:58 AM Title: The Experiment
Wow! Excellent start. How big is this story going to be? I love gullivera type stories so that alone already peaked my interest.
I loved your writing and worldbuilding. Also wasn’t expecting that early death. Poor Anton. Can’t blame Jen too much for feeling this angry and frustrated (which I’m glad you provided reasoning behind her behavior and response btw) A giant destroying and eating just because “she can and it feels good” is so meh, but here it’s completely understandable why she’s pissed.
Would’ve liked to see a bit of giant couple action before Jen was alone, but alas it was still a good read.
Some stuff I’m particularly interested in:1) the language barrier between the lillis and Jennifer. Hopefully some communication between them and her will become possible and we get to learn more about what it’s like seeing her from their pov. 2) are there somelillis that aren’t hostile towards jen and seek to befriend her? Surely there are some outliers and small factions that may seek to ally with her.3) most importantly, what happened to the other 3 scientists! The lillis have proven to be strong in numbers so Jen will need her friends.
Overall, I love it! Look forward to the next chapters!
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for taking the time to leave a comment! I greatly appreciate it.
I have something like, 30 chapters planned for the story. I hope I keep my motivation up to write the entire time. It's been a lot of fun so far. Yea, I actually enjoy giant couples stuff myself, but that's not what this story is about. And I'm with you when it comes to violence caused by the giantess. It's much more impactful when there's a reason to the madness.
I won't be able to answer your three other questions, I'm afraid. It'll spoil everything I have planned. BUT they will be answered as the story progresses. I plan to unpack and unravel all these mysterious as we watch Jen trying to navigate this crazy world. Thank you again for leaving a comment!
[Report This]Date: September 15 2023 8:19 PM Title: The Experiment
This was a great three chapters of the story dude you did a very good job on the violence and morality of the whole situation for Jen so far
I’m interested in knowing why the Lilliputians are so violent to her at first and if there good ones that will later help her and her companions
another Question is if Brobdingnagians exist as well making the whole situation worse for Jen but who knows.
overall a really great start can’t wait for more 👍
Author's Response:
Yay, my first review!
We will learn why Lilliputians are the way they are, as the story progresses. That goes for your question with Brobdingnag. We'll just have to see what's in store for Jen. Sorry for dodging your questions, but I don't want to spoil anything.