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Reviewer: MicroThaumaturge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2024 4:40 AM Title: Ch 10. The Best is Yet to Come

I love almost everything about this finale.  The couple moving to a smaller, accepting piece of civilization, the welcoming townspeople, their wonderful coupling once they've been reunited - it's all wonderful.  This is the ending the two of them deserved, at least until they take the next step in their lives, and you deopped plenty of breadcrumbs to suggest how that might go.

The one thing I would have liked to see, is Lanz finding a reason to live for himself.  I'm so glad that Miriam can be and is that for him, but to be truly healthy, he needs something for himself as well, if only to avoid becoming lost in his incredible partner.  However, it's only been 6 months.  There's plenty of time for him to heal, and to grow as a person, and this ending leaves that as a possibility.

Thank you so much for the time and effort you put into this story, and thank you for sharing it with us.  Stranded With The Enemy has been a powerful, captivating, detailed, and living story, and I am sad to see it end.  I suppose I will have to console myself by diving into the next couple chapters of Twin Sizes, which I haven't had a chance to read yet.

Thank you again, and well fucking done.



Author's Response:

Thank you! In my head, Chapter 9's the real finale and this is more a sort of epilogue that I felt the audience deserved. Like with Mixing Sizes, my goal was to end on maximum good feels and point to a hopeful future for our protags. 

That's a good point you make about Lanz finding his own happiness alongside that provided to him by Miriam. Lanz is a character who has never been able to live for himself, always acting on the behest of those with control over him, so I probably should have delved into that for this finale, but I do think he would need some time to actually find that for himself. 

Thank you so much for reading, and for letting me know you liked it! I can only hope my future work continues to impress.

Reviewer: MicroThaumaturge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2024 4:16 AM Title: Ch 9. The No More Hero

I have to apologize for how long I dallied between my initial read of this chapter, and finally leaving a review.  I remember being in a bit of a daze, reading this around 1 am, simultaneously bone weary, and yet feeling the adrenaline coursing through me.

This chapter, like this entire story, was phenomenal, and yet I would also say that this chapter stood head ans shoulders above the rest in terms of storytelling.  We meet the family, steal plans to a superweapon, fake a death, act out a lover's quarrel, and so much more in this chapter.  I am still blown away.

I love how you also push this subtext that Lanz might be playing Miriam.  It's hard to believe, given prior events, and we know they're both thespians at heart, to some degree, but you still maintain enough doubt to keep around that niggling question of, "was it real, or was it Lanz playing the part as he carries out his mission as a super spy?"

Special shout-out to Miriam's parents.  Her dad is monstrous in his convictions, but you humanize him through his love of family as his core value and driving force.  He's truly paving a road to hell with the intent of keeping his daughter safe.  I can respect that sentiment, even as I condemn his actions.

Miriam's mom seems an absolute delight.  I'm so glad Miriam had her in her life as a role model.

As for the scenario, I love how you approached it.  Fake Lanz death, spread work of the doomsday device, and turn the tables on Miriam's father all in one fell swoop.  It was a great approach, made all the better by the "is he, isn't he?" looming potential for betrayal.  As I said before, this was phenomenal.  A solid 12/10.



Author's Response:

Yay! Wondering if I pulled off the final chapters in your eyes has long been weighing on my mind, and I'm elated to hear you liked them. It's probably obvious from its quality, but chapter 9 was actually the first chapter I had fully fleshed out of this story beyond the initial concept which is to say everything that comes before it was written to lead to this, and I had regularly tweaked this chapter to keep up with where I was taking things prior. As of now, this is probably still the work I'm most proud of, and it makes me so happy that it has resonated so strongly with so many people.

One of the hardest parts I'm finding as a writer is getting into the reader's head specifically regarding how much they can tell where things are heading. I know Lanz isn't betraying Miriam and that they're actually playing Pierre, but I simultaneously don't want the audience to know that for certain while also keeping it from being an unreasonable shock when the truth is revealed. Keeping that delicate balance in check when I know all the answers and can't put myself in the shoes of someone who doesn't is an interesting challenge, even in less twist heavy works like Twin Sizes.

General Irvine was a lot of fun to write. I don't often write villains (in fact, he might be my only one so far?), and even then, he's much less of a direct antagonist than a typical villain. Military types makes for great villains, though, because they can justify to themselves the most heinous acts imaginable, all for the name of country, duty, family, or whatever else they hold dear. In an odd way, I find him relatable at the human level, doing what he thinks best for the people most important to him with that conviction coming from a place of genuine love, though it leads him down a path of carnage.

Rosa, on the other hand, had to be a complete contrast to that. All the love without any of the atrocities. I figured her for the blissful ignorant type, at least when it comes to her husband's military career, someone who sees the good in people without looking too close for all the bad tucked away.

Man, I'm really glad this chapter turned out. I can get across how many times I had to go through the main sequence to make sure it was airtight. "Is this plausible? Would he act this way? Would this guy buy it? etc. ad infinitum." Thank you for all kind words. I always appreciate them no matter when they arrive.

Reviewer: Octosquid11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2024 10:56 PM Title: Ch 10. The Best is Yet to Come

What a fucking phenomenal piece of literature. I mean no hyperbole when I say this is the gold standard for what a story should be. Characters are fun, descriptions are vivid, the lavish prose is amazing. Seeing the pair grow on each other is literally the best character work I've read, it feels natural and earned, while also not being too slow. The foreshadowing of the double-double cross way earlier in the story was great. I seriously have nothing but good things to say about this one. I could go on and on, and because you deserve it, I will. Rapid-fire round!

World is great, worldbuilding is well done and natural. I loved how you implied what decade it was through the technology rather than outright saying it (vietnam-war era weaponry, correct? Also, was that a nuke later in the story?). This is a world I'd love to see explored more if you ever do something like this again.

Gecko program is cool as hell, too, I adore that body-horror type stuff (genuinely super cool).

The tiny technology is a magnificent way of tipping the odds.

Setting is just great fun. I can really picture the lush forest, the shimmering blue water pools, the rocky outcroppings. 

Again, I cannot understate how much fun it is seeing the pair interact throughout the story, alone on the island. I like their little films they make with one another, though I did worry for a moment that they were losing their shit.

The little bit about how easy it would be for Miriam to kill Lanz, while typically not my thing, elicited genuine fear from me, so great work with that.

Generally just great work making us feel connected to the characters. 

TL;DR: fantastic work, the rating doesn't let me go high enough. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! This is extremely high praise, and I cannot express how much I appreciate it (though I'm gonna try anyway). This story was very stressful to write for a variety of reasons, most significantly that I've never done enemies to lovers before and was terrified of progressing their relationship at unsatisfying pace (whether too fast or too slow) and making sure it was believable. I'm so, so happy that I apparently managed to succeed on that front from your and others' feedback.

Thanks for appreciating my worldbuilding through the era of weaponry mentioned. I was actually going for WWII-era (which is why Baltzimar was in the middle of developing nukes), but I did cheat and included some later tech as "prototypes" (I had to include a Desert Eagle, I'm sorry!). My main goal was to establish this world as pre-computers/pre-cellphones, so Vietnam War is close enough for my satisfaction.

Environmental descriptions are something I struggle with more than characterization and such, so I'm glad so many people liked how I wrote the island. Tropics at least give me a lot of colors to work with, so that helps a lot.

I think after enough time stranded, anyone is going to go at least a little crazy, even hardened soldiers. I knew they wouldn't completely lose their minds, but after enough time from civilization, it makes sense their inhibitions would start to fade away.

I don't remember which moment you're referring to with me describing Miriam's ability to kill Lanz, but that's something I find very appealing about gentle giantess: the idea that they could effortlessly kill their tiny companion, but choose not to and consciously hold themselves back when handling them. Glad you were able to stomach that, sorry if I ever went too far with it lol.

Thanks again for all the kind words. I'm really proud of all the love this story has garnered.

Reviewer: Mr_nein Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2023 5:46 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost

I've been on this website for 3+ years. Never made an account. But this story was something else. All I can say is... Bra...fucking....O. Good shit mate



Author's Response:

Wow, I'm honored to hear that! Thank you! I'm overjoyed by how much love this story has garnered.

Reviewer: sweetpea2945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2023 7:13 AM Title: Ch 1. Lost

Such a good story! I love a slow burn and all your scenes are written so well. Couldn’t ask for a better ending. Can’t wait to read more of your work! 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm of the belief that a slow burn leads to a more satisfying payoff, so I'm happy to hear you appreciate that. I like to go all out with my endings, make them as happy/satisfying as can be. Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Maiqtheliar8888 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2023 4:00 AM Title: Ch 10. The Best is Yet to Come

...and a perfectly executed finale, couldn't ask for much better than this. :3



Author's Response:

Thank you! I do like my happy endings lol. Glad you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: Ijod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2023 11:19 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost

This has been a great one all around. After Mixing Sizes I had no doubts about your ability to write a good giantess-tiny relationship, but here you did it while also writing a good desert island story! The setting, the characters, the twists, the ending, I liked everything here.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I wanted to write something more plot-centric since slice of life is more of my go-to, and militaristic deserted island story seemed like it'd be fun to write. I'm glad to hear I pulled it off lol. 

Reviewer: ColdAtlas Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2023 6:34 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost

Great story from start to finish. I look forward to your next entries. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm already hard at work on some new stuff and am excited to put it out once it's ready.

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2023 4:57 AM Title: Ch 1. Lost

I really thought this story was the total package.  Good characterization. Good descriptions of the environment, and some really nice sex scenes.   I loved it!   I could tell that you spell checked and went over grammar, and I wish more people would do that too.   I will look for more of your writing in the future, keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm quite proud of how this one turned out. Hearing that my environmental descriptions were good makes me happy because I struggle with that more than the other two things you mentioned (though I'm glad you enjoyed those too!). I always proofread and revise every chapter before uploading it. I think doing so is kinda the bare minimum when sharing writing. I take pride in this stuff, and it'd bother me if it were full of errors (admittedly, I can't always catch everything during revision, but I try my best). Thank you for appreciating that. 

Reviewer: Maiqtheliar8888 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2023 1:28 PM Title: Ch 9. The No More Hero

I was so hoping that Lanz's double-cross was a ruse-- and I'm so relieved that it was. great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I figured the ruse would make for a good wrench to toss into the story. Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2023 7:42 AM Title: Ch 9. The No More Hero

LOVE the story! You sure we can't have a bit in the finale with Lanz going completely up Miaram's butt?

Author's Response:

Thank you. And sorry, but I wasn't planning on doing that.

Reviewer: gtsafficionado Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2023 4:47 PM Title: Ch 9. The No More Hero

Amazing work!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Indyboy55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2023 7:43 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost

Amazing series, I was hooked right away! The storytelling and character development and relationship-building is superb! Always excited when I see a new chapter posted!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! The characters' development and how their relationship transformed are very important to this story and thus required a lot of effort (and stress) out of me, so it's good to see that paid off. I'm working hard on the next chapter as we speak! 

Reviewer: 7inch peepee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2023 8:26 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost

This is one of the best stories I have seen here! But the end of chapter really made me sad hopefully he is just acting infornt of his country man 



Author's Response:

Thank you! You'll just have to wait and see.

Reviewer: Warerar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2023 11:54 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost

Sizey enemies to lovers hell yeah!

Author's Response:

Yep! A classic trope that never gets old. Glad you like it.

Reviewer: MicroThaumaturge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2023 3:29 PM Title: Ch 8. Farewell to Yesterday

Loving this story!

I'm really hoping the discussion about The Man Called Revolver is showing its greater relevance here (the gun twirl is a great callback to suggest it is).  Great twist, great foreshadowing, great callback, I'm just in awe.  (I'm also thankful to see Lanz's tiny contact wasn't female.  No need to conflate the current situation with April 30th, at least not at this stage.)

I'm excited to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Next one will be a doozy.

Reviewer: Mad_Scientist Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2023 11:48 AM Title: Ch 8. Farewell to Yesterday

Nothing could have prepared for that twist! I already feel bad for Miriam when she finds out!



Author's Response:

I'm glad to see you're still enjoying this story!

Reviewer: MicroThaumaturge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2023 11:37 AM Title: Ch 5. A Walk Through the Woods

Awww, that was absolutely adorable!  Lanz is growing as a person, embracing the side of himself kept forcibly suppressed for so long.  He expressed himself quite well.  And then poor Miriam is catching feelings.  I hope that's a chronic concern.

The tooth has me quite intrigued.  My guess is tracker, since a suicide tooth probably would have cracked with that extraction method.  Glad to see Lanz is taking steps to distance himself from his bloodsoaked past, and to hold onto the woman he has. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I figured some emotional development was needed after the prior chapter's carnal carnival. Always happy to make some hearts melt.

Reviewer: MicroThaumaturge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2023 12:54 AM Title: Ch 4. Taking What Can Never Be Returned

"I solemnly swear I have never harmed, nor intended harm, nor had a negative thought about the Fidelphi nation, or about Fidelphi individuals.  Please do not send the Reaper's Little Helper.  I've been good, I swear!"

Lanz officially terrifies me.  That's some hardcore programming, but that pales in comparison to his lethality.

(Small side note: I find myself wondering if the bullets used on the captive were not poisoned.  Or does the poison only affect bigs?)

Was the "I'll spare no expense" line inspired by John Hammond? It's a good line.

The fishing scene was golden.  I love seeing Lanz warming up and breaking out of that shell, and I'm impressed as all hell that he pulled in a fish twice his size without a reel.

As for the Eagle scene, it was touching to hear her almost confess how lonely she would be without him.  And if Miriam ever wants to play receiver on my football team, I'll happily send balls her way - with every expectation she'll take them well in hand.  Seriously, impressive catch.

Note to self: if traveling while tiny and at risk of being marooned with a giantess on a deserted island, always bring plenty of soap.  Preferably shaped to be wearable.

Miriam's intensity in taking Lanz's V-card was something to behold.  Very hot.  Very well written.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the chapter (and the escapades within).

I wasn't sure if I wanted to include the flashback at first, but it was so fun writing it, given how different it is from what I normally write, that I'm happy I did it. The line you mentioned was not inspired by John Hammond as I completely forgot about that part of Jurassic Park, but that's a good pull, and there will be references to stuff in later chapters. 

As for the bullets... yeah, that was kind of an oversight on my part. They are still poisoned because that's how Fidelphi makes all its ammunition for its military (given they are almost always fighting bigs, its more efficient to just treat all their ammo. It's really only special situations, like with Lanz, where they are targeting other tinies, and bullets are effective no matter what against them.) Now, realistically, the poison should probably have a stronger effect on tinies since it'd be a larger dose to their smaller bodies, but my logic at the time (which I definitely did not do a good job of expressing in the text) is that because the toxin is synthetic, it's designed to target nerve ends in the body part it penetrates, so it has the same effect on any creature no matter the size (again, have no clue if the science on that tracks anywhere outside my head, but I figure in a setting where people can be five inches tall, I can maybe skew scientific fact here and there, I dunno). Even though their poisoned and paralyzing, the victim still feels the initial shock/pain of the bullet entering their body before their limb goes numb.  

The football analogy was one of those things I thought of before I even fully figured out the context for it. Like, Lanz is going to be caught and I'm going to describe it like that because it sounds cool lol. 

Wearable soap is a great idea. So great that it almost makes me reconsider sabotaging the soap supply so you're stuck with an unwashed giantess (as you should prefer!)

Glad you enjoyed Miriam's "cherry boy hunting." I love that sort of dynamic and was afraid it wouldn't be well-received, but people seemed to dig it, so that's a relief.

Reviewer: ColdAtlas Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2023 5:19 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost

If I were the both of them, I would keep their guard up. What if it turns out to be....pirates? 



Author's Response:

It's certainly sound advice. Who knows what could be in that boat? :)

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