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Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2023 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Have read this story some time in the past and just wanted to put this review out there for its own sake.  I wish more people could read and review it to really appreciate it.

This story has become one of my favorites.  You have a knack for both plot line flow and character development that I envy, especially regarding the whirlwind of emotion brewing in Claire throughout the story.  There are even times where I momentarily empathized with Jasper until his big reveal as a twisted villain.  You also capture Archie's emotional immaturity pretty well to boot, showing him as a sort of proverbial "man-child" who couldn't be a hero when it counted and save Claire's life in the moment of truth.

As for Claire, you really went all-out in her transformation into a nearly all-powerful demigoddess of a woman, accentuating both her beauty as well as the raw power she ends up possessing upon her enlargement.  You've also done your research well into the broader downtown Manhattan area during chapters 2 and 3 (I ended up Googling some of the landmarks you mentioned).

It was an interesting ending you gave for Claire, with things ending on a relatively happy note for her in spite of the chaos and devastation that came from her growth.  I was both baffled and amused that she apparently has to now milk herself at regular intervals, though I imagine that those with strong breast fetishes would find it entertaining enough.  Also enjoyed the surprise growth for Mia at the end of the third chapter too.  I'm guessing that Claire's milk will have to be kept away from the general public and studied meticulously, lest women around the world suddenly start turning into sexy mini-giantesses in the process and changing the power dynamic between the sexes.

All-in-all, a very satisfying read, one that I've downloaded and revisit now and again.  Thank you for this little three-part gem!

Reviewer: purplereader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2023 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 3

It makes me wonder if someone else has actually ingested Claire's milk before Mia accidentally did.


I am excited to see Millenium-Man defeated too.

Reviewer: Pok420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2023 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, really love this story. Are you new to the game? If so, phenomenal writing. Do you do giant couple's stories?

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