Date: August 10 2023 7:02 PM Title: 04. The bigger, the better
I like the graphic detail of Josh getting the close up views of Bia's mouth. Also the great gulping scene. I'm saving up my money for a trip to Portugal now.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I tried a good vore scene in the last chapter as it was meant to be the main vore event of the story, and I'm glad I seemingly reached my goal!
About the trip, okay, just go there when their father isn't home, but beware, they're cruel...
[Report This]Date: August 10 2023 9:20 AM Title: 01. Meeting the sisters
For years, I used to just surf, read good stories, masturbate in sex scenes, and leave it until the next one. But this story is so HOT that I had to enter comment. Do the twins want a bi goy to torture? I am open to ideas…
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you! I'm happy my story was good enough for you to even register just to comment! And, well, I guess they'll enjoy torturing anyone who crosses their path, so maybe you should just pay the twins a surprise visit when their father isn't home... ;)
Date: August 01 2023 6:58 PM Title: 02. The twins' new toy
A fun story, I think it's certainly got a lot to offer. I enjoy the language swapping, it's easy to follow and adds some authenticity. There's a fun dynamic of speaking a language he doesn't understand. There's a lot of variety in interaction, and while I'm not usually into toilet stuff I can still appreciate it.
My only criticism would be to dwell a little longer on the steamier bits. The section where he's inside the sock gets a lot of attention, while the vore gets just a few sentences. That might just be my personal preference.
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you for you review and criticism, they're very welcome! This story was originally commissioned by a Portuguese guy, closely based (at least physically) on two twin sisters he knows in real life, so to add to the 'realism' of the sisters in this story, I wrote them being Portuguese and speaking European Portuguese, as they do in real life.
About the little attention to the vore scene, it's because that vore scene in the first chapter isn't the main vore event of the story. There will be more vore and, yes, the incoming vore scene will receive a lot of attention. :D
[Report This]Date: July 31 2023 4:33 PM Title: 02. The twins' new toy
This is a very exciting and well written story. Great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you! It's not complete yet, more chapters to come, so maybe more reading fun for you! ^^