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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2023 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 3

Mixed on this one.  Son #1 James dies, then somehow sons #1 James and #2 Joe are under their mom's butt???  Why sister and mom?  Perhaps STEPmom and STEPsister? 

Otherwise the story had potential.

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