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Reviewer: TerryLarka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2023 1:24 AM Title: The Afternoon

Awesome story. These character's relationship is really cute, and I like the idea of them teasing each other at different sizes. My favorite moment was the tiny woman writing "I <3 U" in the chocolate, that was sweet, literally and figuratively. The mouthplay throughout the story was incredibly well-written



Author's Response:

omg that makes me so happy! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! thank you very much for the review... it means a lot to me ^^

Reviewer: GTS33 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2023 1:11 PM Title: The Afternoon

You've come so far as a writer! I'm very proud!

Author's Response:

dawww thanks you ^^

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