Date: August 07 2023 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 6: Desserted
Don't know if it is the end, but I hope she ends up puking the sub out into Eve's stomach.
Author's Response:
I couldn’t really rewrite that into the story since idk if i wasn’t thinking creatively enough but I couldn’t think of an interesting scenario in which they were just in a bigger stomach. My apologies
Date: July 27 2023 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 4: Momster
Nice! I am really torn on what I hope happened to Belinda. On one hand I could hope she got lost on Carmen's foot. On the other I could hope she is still stuck to Lia and got eaten as well. I do know I hope the shrunken students make it out of Lia while she is inside Eve, making them lost inside her instead.
[Report This]Date: July 20 2023 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: Barely a Bite
Best teacher ever.
Author's Response:
Tired teachers make for best teachers
Date: July 20 2023 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 1: Barely a Bite
The text size is too small to read. Could you please reload it so we can increase the text size to be able to read it?
I think the text size may be an issue if you use a less common word processor. Microsoft Word seems to load easier and be user friendly to increasing font size. Just a suggestion.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the suggestion, i write and post these on mobile, so I’m not exactly sure what to do to make it bigger, i tried changing fonts, but i don’t see a letter size option.
[Report This]Date: July 19 2023 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Barely a Bite
Nice start, can't wait for chapter 2 (stinky feet, you got a fan lol)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Chapter 2 should come out relatively soon! Just gotta polish it some more