[Report This]Date: April 01 2024 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
Hope? Really? Considering he's a tiny man in one of your stories, he has no idea how lucky he is!
[Report This]Date: September 26 2023 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Covering Her Tracks
This story has been absolutely excellent so far, and this most recent chapter far exceeded what came before it.
Emily’s bratty, selfish decision in this chapter was an excellent twist, and I’m genuinely very excited to see where this goes next!
[Report This]Date: September 01 2023 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Covering Her Tracks
Wow, you weren't joking when you said there was going to be a big surprise!
There's a fair chance the technicians will be able to say that the reason they can't get him out is that he just isn't there, and Emily will basically have to act natural 24/7 in front of her sister, but much more important than that, this story is just awesome.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you like it! It is certainly an interesting twist for sure
Date: July 08 2023 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 2 - A Cute Pink Thong
"The fact that Lacey told Emily" - does she think of herself in the 3rd person?
I'm not sure why I thought this was going to be unaware, but her knowing about Dakota's situation ended up being a nice surprise for me!
Author's Response:
I bounced between writing that scene as narration and Emily's thoughts/speech several times. Looks like I missed one; thank you!
I'm glad you appreciate the surprise. There's another pretty big one coming next chapter ;-)
[Report This]Date: July 03 2023 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Please, Dakota?
Need more of this! Love the character work and concept
Author's Response:
Very glad you're enjoying it!