[Report This]Date: June 05 2025 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
The overall premise and especially your little POV vignettes from down on the ground were so much fun to read in this story, but God, the last one gave me genuine butterflies in my stomach. It's just so wonderfully unfair to have her friends realise who she is, but are still unable to get her attention, let alone stop her.
I know this is a commission, but as other people have said, I'd love to read another chapter.
[Report This]Date: February 06 2025 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Definitely an underrated story. I would love to see a sequel, where Abby has another sick day, involving Venice or any other city Abby's mother decides to teleport for her daughter's enjoyment. Please consider continuing this.
[Report This]Date: January 26 2025 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story. So happy when Abby used her costume and got more and more into being the rampaging kaiju. Her mall shenanigans were awesome. I was waiting the entire for her to find her classmates. It was really fun. Too bad Mina couldn't call Abby - haha. The fact her mom knows the truth was the best part. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: June 28 2023 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Abby gives the impression of being cute, playful and naive while being terrifying and cruel at the same time. I love characters like this. 😃
[Report This]Date: June 25 2023 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a delightful story! Could use a bit of tightening up but in general it was just a lot of fun!