[Report This]Date: July 23 2023 8:49 PM Title: Kayla's Ascension
Amazing story so far! Any plans to continue this?
Author's Response:
Thank you! And yes, I plan to continue at least 1 or 2 more chapters. I'd like to keep it short and sweet.
[Report This]Date: June 27 2023 5:55 PM Title: Kayla Shrinks Mark
I loving this story. Kayla is great character with the right personality. How big do you see her getting? Personally I’d like to see her mega to giga, crushing cities beneath her toes.
Great work so far, look forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for your feedback! I don't think I'll be writing extensively about Kayla being giga, but we'll see.
Date: June 20 2023 1:27 AM Title: Kayla Shrinks Mark
Um, your story is one huge paragraph. No matter how good it may be, and I believe it probably is; it's almost impossible to read as one solid paragraph. Could you please break it up into more easily read, smaller paragraphs.
Would be more than happy to review it once it is more manageable to read. Thanks in advance.
A bit of advice, I found when using Microsoft Word you may need to add an extra "enter" {i.e. press the "enter" button twice} in between paragraphs for proper spacing, though not always. It really depends on the program; but you can do a preview screening before posting so you can see any potential issues.
Heck I've posted a few times and still have issues, so don't feel bad about it. Though having one huge block of words to read might discourage others from reading your story.
Looking forward to reading your story once reformatted.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! I've tried to address the spacing issue. Still having difficulty with line indentation, not really sure how to fix that.