Date: March 19 2014 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
I actually teared up at this. Hell of a story!
Date: November 25 2012 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, your story was better than I expected. I like the idea, even though I don't think the characters should be able to communicate with each other in that sort of scenario. I'm not sure how she could have heard him all the way from inside her stomach.
[Report This]Date: October 20 2009 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story, and nice, depressing ending. After playing Mother 3, I've grown to appreciate the more downer endings in fiction. :)
Author's Response: Most stories on this site have bad endings (everyone being crushed) but since the hot, evil giantess wins in the end, its not considered by many a bad ending. I, however make it a point in my writting to have the evil giantess, no matter how pretty she may be, lose in some way, shape or form.
[Report This]Date: October 17 2009 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
It was a good story even if the ending was a bit sad.
Good job.
Author's Response: Well the ending was intended, anyway thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: October 15 2009 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
..........Wow....That was....wow.... This story was awesome. Bravo dude. Bravo! The ending was so sad. It really got to me.
But I just got to ask just to make sure. Was the goddess somehow his daugther?
Anyway, top notch, awesome job. I usually like to read smut gts stories, but I'm really glad this caught my attention.This story is definatly a fav.
BTW I didn't see any errors. ^_^
YA-HA!!!
Author's Response: Finally someone responds...The story was in my humble opinion pretty good, unfortunatly the people of the website prefer perverted, fetish-related stories. About the ending, it was implied that she was his daughter...perhaps I could write a backstory on if, and how, that happened but like I said it probably wont be read much :(