[Report This]Date: January 30 2024 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 9
WOW!!!!!! Great story. Pretty much a fabulous story with everything going for it. Top notch!
[Report This]Date: December 22 2023 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great to see the continuation of this story. Loni being reduced down to Witch Trish's poop was wonderful to read, especially Loni seeing it happen.
One has to wonder why the bones were not digested, as they do contain the nutrient rich morrow. Is it because Loni is going to be reintroduced to his own skeleton; perhaps as a living skeleton squirming about in Witch Trish's pussy as a living dildo?
There are a few, very few grammatical errors, such as "she" in place of "him", or "her" rather than "the"; but nothing to distracting that it takes away from your incredible story. Perhaps a proofread or two a few hours after you write a chapter to make sure you are writing what you are trying to convey might be in order. Heck, I make this mistake myself quite often,
Which ever way this story goes, I'm glad it's back and even more intriguing and enticing as ever.
Keep up the fantastic work.
[Report This]Date: November 25 2023 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
Very nice chapter, actually quite excellent. Especially like the detailed stomach breakdown process of Loni's physical body in Trish's stomach {as you allude to, digestion and absorption actually takes place in the small intestines via its enzymes}.
Ok, Trish is a "bad" witch; but she just did something ultra-hot and sexy with Loni's body and soul. Is Loni going to come out of his state of shock and ultimately realize this?
"Trish walked out of the basement and headed back upstairs, causing Loni's floating soul to be dragged along for the ride as if he was a dog on a leash.", it seems as though that is now the basis of Loni's existence with Trish. Witch Trish a Goddess / Owner and Loni a worshiper / property / pet.
Go with it Loni!!!
[Report This]Date: October 27 2023 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 6
It never dawned on me before; but perhaps being digested by Trish's sexy body might actually lead to a greater existence and untold pleasures for Loni.
Nice descriptions of Loni being digested, especially like Trish adding a green glow so that Loni could see where he was and what was happening.
My only complaint is grammatical, you keep using "her" instead or "he" when referring to Loni.
[Report This]Date: October 12 2023 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
NICE!!!!! So long Loni, Ba-Bye. Enjoy your new home. Have to admit, I was hoping Trish would swallow Loni, alive.
Now that Loni has been swallowed by Trish, she said he would live forever as part of her. Does that mean Loni will become a conscious part of every inch of Trish's body? Basically a living layer of her flesh. Perhaps he could float about her body and concentrate his essence here or there like her feet, her breasts, her ass, or her pussy?
Glad that Trish has taken complete control of Loni, or has she? Loni is now in Trish's tummy along with the stone. He has direct access to it and its powers.
Author's Response:
Glad you're liking it so much! New chapter is up!
[Report This]Date: October 08 2023 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
Not sure what being part of Goddess Trish would be, more or less be like; but Loni should wake up to the possibility that it just might be the greatest thing that ever presented itself to him.
Hopefully we get to find out just what Goddess Trish means by becoming part of her body. Does she mean via absorption, by transformation, or perhaps through digestion?
Looking forward to future chapters.
Author's Response:
You will just have to wait to see what it involves ;)
I have just uploaded another section though, so you are one step closer!
Thanks for your kind and constructive reviews as always!
[Report This]Date: September 20 2023 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait to read more. I've been following this story since you first posted your first chapter, and it has not disappointed in the least.
Aside from the rare grammatical error {e.g. "he" for "she" / "him" for "her", or visa versa}, which is quite easy to read through and understand your intent; your story is very well written and enjoyable.
I can't wait to see where this story goes.
Author's Response:
I'm really glad you like it DW :)
I'll try my best to avoid those grammatical errors. They're unfortunately a habit of mine.
I hope you continue to enjoy where this story goes!
[Report This]Date: September 16 2023 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is a really great story. Can't wait to read future chapters.
One has to wonder, why does Trish need an audience to watch what she does?
Back to your story overall, you really write well. You give a depth and descriptions of the mundane that add an extra level of surrealism.
It's those small details that make a story so much more realistic. As an example, what's the first things one would notice in a new environment? It's the visual light, strange sounds, and new smells. You just about hit it on target with this story.
Can't wait to read more; and what exactly is Loni's reward.
Author's Response:
Really happy you like it, thank you so much!
Maybe Trish just has a certain psychological tendency towards wanting to be observed? :P Realistically it's what my client requested so I was just following instructions on that front. I like putting details in, and I hope that detail serves it well when the story gets a little more surreal in future chapters. :)
[Report This]Date: August 01 2023 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
Greatly looking forward to the next chapter.
Except for an occasional "he" / "she" pronoun mistake, a truly fantastic story.