[Report This]Date: June 13 2023 5:18 PM Title: Meals and Mush
Another excellent chapter! This is some of the best character progression I’ve ever read. I love how he bows to her jokingly, hopefully it’s a bit of foreshadowing to her future expectations!
Author's Response:
I am genuinely touched you reviewed separate chapters here, and I want you to know I appreciate it a lot. I’m trying to include the sort of stuff that slowly slide down that slippery slope into true domination.
[Report This]Date: June 12 2023 4:30 PM Title: Being Alone is Boring
Very good writing so far, love how you’re slowly transforming your characters.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoy it! Hopefully by the end the transformation will come off as believable, yet the depths of the change be shocking. Much more to come.
[Report This]Date: June 12 2023 6:25 AM Title: A Helping Hand
One of the best stories I’ve read in a long time. Please continue and keep up the amazing work. I love love love the character development and progression so far.
Author's Response:
Super glad you enjoy it! The story outline I have is twenty thousand words, so I hope you’re ready for a slow burn. But the characters will progress greatly by the very end.
[Report This]Date: June 12 2023 6:14 AM Title: A Helping Hand
Oh wow, this story is amazing! Can’t wait for it to continue. Hope the mother in law starts to become wise to his little fetish.
Fantastic work!
Author's Response:
She will, most definitely. And there will be consequences for the both of them.