[Report This]Date: July 27 2023 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was fun! Even if an exercise - you’re a great writer and super creative even within the tropes and confines of gts. Plenty of options to continue if you wanted: could make this an anthology of different climbers in difficult situations (two girls decide to mess with the tinies, girl with large unclimbable feet becomes a challenge for an uber competitive climber, etc.) or could follow this guy’s journey, assuming he isn’t instantly squished when she starts climbing.
Or, you know, if you wanted to continue Towering Peaks, I also wouldn’t complain…;-)
Author's Response:
Lol today's you're lucky day
Date: June 04 2023 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely liked the story. Yeah maybe the next chapter could be a girl that he knew. Or maybe a girl that refuses to take her shoes off, the tiny couldn't do anything about it. This story surely has potential
[Report This]Date: June 03 2023 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
This read was absolutely captivating, from start to finish. Your attention to detail was great, and I loved how you focused on the uncaring side of unaware. I like unaware in general, but there is something really interesting when the giantess just doesn't really care, and is causing struggles out of ignorance. If you write more for this, I would love to see it. I'm also very partial to the fact that our main character didn't die. I mean, when I read and envision myself in these scenarios, I don't want to die. Granted, I don't envision myself liking feet, as it adds to the power dynamic. But there is something more satisfying about a prolonged suffering, a lifetime of entrapment. And then, sometimes I enjoy happy endings as well. I'm rambling at this point, but the point is, this story was written really well, you are great at details, and I am looking forward to seeing more in the future.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :) I definitely think ignorantly obvious is an underrated attitude for a giantess to have
[Report This]Date: June 03 2023 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very good and descriptive. I like the focus on him being ignored compared to clumps of lint, I've always enjoyed that feeling of being lesser. I think the only thing I'd have changed is the inclusion of someone that the protagonist new before they had shrank. Them reflecting on their former friend as they're climbing their sole would have been great. I also enjoyed that their foot was realistically depicted with debris and callouses.
If you do a second chapter my request would be some detailed crushing as they begin to slide from the relative safety of the toe area down the length of this woman's foot. Perhaps it would start with some bruising and the like as they're fumbled around by her toes, ending with the tiny man's jaw being crushed or being destroyed entirely underfoot near the heel. Some reflection from the giantess at the end would be nice, perhaps they find the tiny and even recognize them? Just some thoughts, of course.
Whatever you do, I look forward to reading your work in the future.
Author's Response: Man, that inclusion of the giantess being someone the guy knew would've been a good idea, especially since I mentioned that concept earlier