[Report This]Date: June 12 2023 1:41 PM Title: Confrontation in the Forest
This is where the fun begins
Author's Response:
Writing's for droids.
[Report This]Date: May 31 2023 6:22 PM Title: Confrontation in the Forest
I don't see why Severus is in such a foul mood. Man gots the golden deal here! There or worse places he could have found himself in. Shrunken before a master who doesn't care for him, or worse a BEACH! Sand already gets everywhere at normal sized, imagine the hell it'd be for him!
A fun story that was well worth the wait. Truly you are a user of the force. A master of the Dark Size.
Author's Response:
Severus's old master was a beach. Lots of sand for him to work through there. Since we're in a forest, I, unfortunately, cannot work in any sand-related scenarios (cue Darth V sighing in relief).
[Report This]Date: May 31 2023 4:07 AM Title: Confrontation in the Forest
Excellent job at capturing the sense of scale! Severus really got it easy, especially when you consider all that could’ve happened to him. Another absolute banger!
Author's Response:
Always the goal there, I want the reader to be able to smell her big, fresh feet. Severus, sure .. he got it easy, if it's not for his own pride. Because they can take his body and his powers, but there's the one thing you can't take from a sith ... HIS PRIIIIIIIIIIDE!
Date: May 31 2023 2:15 AM Title: Confrontation in the Forest
I found myself really engaged with this story - I’ll be sure to check out your other work. So much irony in this that made it even more humiliating and entertaining at the same time. Can’t wait to see what’s to come!
Author's Response:
Irony eh? Really tempting me to unleash the Sheevposting. Anyways, glad you were engaged. I can't say for certain when I'll update this again, as this was sort of a one-off idea that came to me, but I do have some ideas for future installments.
Hope you enjoy the rest of my work, and feel free to leave feedback on that as well!
[Report This]Date: May 30 2023 6:08 PM Title: Confrontation in the Forest
A fun story so far, one wonders what our protagonists master will think of him when she inevitably hears of what happened to her apprentice, but then it sounds like she sent him off to suffer a worse fate anyway. I can't imagine a worse thing to happen to a Sith, a person obsessive about power losing it all... well that's the fun of these sorts of stories anyways, right?
Author's Response:
It's a job she'll have to finish herself at one point. But yes indeed for poor Severus, the next couple of chapters will just be copium and smut, poor Severus.