[Report This]Date: May 29 2023 4:45 PM Title: 3
Well, trying to stay on Eva's good side (or at least away from her bad side) hasn't led to any immediate negative consequences, and that smile could be interpreted as a positive reaction to our obedience (we have to stay positive here), I think we should ride this out a bit longer. Also, the prospect of being seen by another person, one maybe not as spiteful as Eva, seems like a better idea than leaving our fate entirely in this woman's hands.
With that in mind, I'm voting for A.
Date: May 27 2023 5:25 PM Title: 3
[A] Should not even think of resisting, its not wise to piss her off
Date: May 27 2023 5:04 PM Title: 3
A. I want to see how this plays out if we just keep choosing the path of least resistance.
Date: May 27 2023 4:20 PM Title: 1
I choose A. I want to submit to her as a slave and dont want to make her angry. Please guys,vote for A too. We have a new goddess. Dont waste that opportunity :3
[Report This]Date: May 27 2023 3:09 PM Title: 3
It seems like progress on our current project has become a bit quiet. During times like these it’s best to take the initiative to impress our supervisor. Thus, the best choice going forward is not to wait around for our supervisor. Therefore, I’m going to pick option [B].
It took me too long to realize how add a rating to a review.
Date: May 25 2023 10:35 PM Title: 2
I choose b! Never give up!
Author's Response:
Very brave!
[Report This]Date: May 25 2023 8:13 PM Title: 2
In that case, as much as I'd like to tie things up and make it interesting, I think I have to go with A here.
Also, I can't blame you for having predetermined routes planned for each option, and that doesn't make this less interesting, but if you're willing to incorporate some of our rationale somewhere down the line, that would be awesome! I do understand that can lead to a lot of extra effort, though.
Author's Response:
We'll see! As it is, the chapters are sometimes small so I may need to flesh a few out a bit to fit the minimum word count here, so anything is possible. But overall I hope the options given will offer a reasonable choice in general.
[Report This]Date: May 24 2023 5:30 PM Title: 2
Great story so far! I'm voting [A] for this chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: May 24 2023 3:52 PM Title: 2
I'm liking this choose your own adventure format. I'm normally not big into second-person narratives, but the interactive component makes it feel appropriate here, and this story has been pretty immersive thus far just through your writing style, which helps as well.
I'm curious, do you already have predetermined routes worked out for each option, or might the logic and reasoning voters give potentially help shape how you move forward with the next chapter? Not so much that the voters dictate how exactly what the character does or how they implement that logic and reasoning, but would they be considered moving forward, if that makes any sense.
That may be a factor in which option I vote for.
Anyway, great start to this story, and I look forward to seeing where it goes!
Author's Response:
Good question! For this one right now it's predetermined, so the route's already there. But I do like that idea for the future, might be good to do something more dynamic like that (it'd just require a bit more time around it!).
Date: May 24 2023 2:44 PM Title: 2
It might not seem like much, but we were able to elevate our position from the floor into being level with projects at our boss’s hands. Although, it seems like it’s not the most comfortable place to be in. I guess the grass is always greener on the other side.
Furthermore, we might have misinterpreted our newfound dynamic with our boss considering how she responded to our increased courage. Perhaps it would be best to acclimate ourselves to our new place in the office culture, before making any big moves.
Thus, I will be going with option [A] once more.
Author's Response:
A very reasonable response, thanks for sharing!
Date: May 22 2023 3:42 PM Title: 1
We let Eva walk all over us by not speaking up in our own defense sooner. Thus, I’m voting for option [A].
I’m sure that our manager will gain newfound appreciation for our character when we face her shoes undaunted, and not continue to walk over us.
Author's Response:
A bold choice, and I appreciate your reasoning!