Date: July 30 2023 2:51 PM Title: The Good Ending: Part Deux
Also, you mention Leah has blonde hair but her pubic hair was called brown. Has she dyed her hair?
[Report This]Date: July 30 2023 2:50 PM Title: The Good Ending: Part Deux
Y'know, it's kinda uncommon for the bullies or sadistic ones to get their comeuppance so I do relish it when I see it lol.
I am curious enough to ask why didn't you just have Carmen and Aiden get together? Not saying I hate Leah but I'm curious.
Also I love how you just threw in his dick his dick smelling lol you love odor huh. That makes two of us at least.
Again, loved the story. Sorry for the amount of reviews I sent. Can't wait for your next one👍🏼
Author's Response:
No need to apologize, I love it when someone enjoys the story. That's the whole point I think. I decided not to have Carmen and Aiden get together because it just didn't seem right. She doesn't feel that way about him, and while she cares deeply for him, she just isn't in love with him romantically. Sometimes people are just friends. And yes, I love odor content. Its the big through line on all my stories. You'll be hard pressed to find a story I write without a hearty amount of odor.
Also, Carmen is a blonde, but in this case the carpet simply doesn't match the drapes ;) Is that still a thing people say? Seems unlikely.
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: June 30 2023 4:15 AM Title: The Good Ending
I thought Carmen was blonde? Also there's a typo near the beginning when Molly starts texting Tyler and you call her Carmen.
Also, really loved this chapter. I thought you abandoned it for a sec lol
I should've known the good ending was coming first since you love bad endings lol
Author's Response:
Yes, Carmen is a blonde. That's been corrected, along with the Carmen/Molly name swap. Been jumping back and forth between stories so much I started to get my characters confused! I really appreciate you letting me know of these mistakes. Plenty of things don't get caught by a text editor when they aren't outright spelling errors, so it's a huge help to point them out.
And it may take a while, as I have two commissions that are turning into pretty long, multi-part stories, but I'll make sure I finish posting this story before I start writing any of my other story plans. I need the practice creating satisfying endings. Thanks for the continued support!!
[Report This]Date: June 30 2023 3:46 AM Title: The Good Ending
I am latching onto this happy ending with a vengeance!!
Aiden deserves this after everything Molly put him through.
(I know I need to go back and retroactively review the previous chapters, I have been reading along but haven't had the chance to review them)
I know there is going to be a bad ending, I know I am going to read, said bad ending.
But I am latching hold of this good ending with fierce dependance XD
Carmen rescuing him was so cathartic. (but I hope there's more catharsis to come)
And Molly's nervousness and realizing that "No"she can't put it over Carmen or people her own size, and there's going to be serious reprecussions coming her way was such sweet paragraphs to read, Carmen grabbing her and asserting herself was also a great scene.
This is reminding me of the "Just desserts" chapter of 'Losing Control' (which if you recall, I reviewed with such elation when Alexis shrunk after all the crap she'd pulled)
I am excited for the rest of the good (cough true cough) ending XD
Author's Response:
It's easy for me to forget there are people out there reading my stories who aren't complete sadists. I took a look back through some of my other stories and saw how everyone was always so cruel. I think it's just easier for me to come up with a fun, fetishy scenario when the giantess is a big, uncaring bully. However, there is undoubtedly a great feeling that comes from justice being served. I hope this one lives up to the expectation! I think it will, though. I'll say we can expect Aiden to get a bit of compensation for his time served.
Thanks so much for reading!!
Date: June 13 2023 6:09 AM Title: Little Man in the Sheets
Can't feel too bad for him since he's really fuckin stupid lmao. He never really realized at a certain point that his life is really in the hands of Molly.
Now that ik there's only two chapters for each ending, I'm assuming next chapter for the bad ending is gonna be her convincing Carmen she doesn't need to spit him up and the last one is gonna be then having sex while he dies.
Or it's gonna be her convincing her of that and then having sex the same chapter and the last chapter is Tyler being lured to their house (cuz they need a new roommate) just so they can repeat the process.
This all really depends on how malicious Molly is huh. Whether or not she's genuinely evil or just very teasing with a tendency to cross boundaries but ultimately meaning no harm.
Date: June 08 2023 6:52 AM Title: The Little Man in the Boot
Wait I just noticed the Fm/F tag lol I seriously don't know what's gonna happen next with that in mind unless it's a mistake.
Author's Response:
Nope that was a mistake. Supposed to add FM/m. Fixed now, thanks for pointing that out. Cheers!
[Report This]Date: June 08 2023 5:11 AM Title: The Little Man in the Boot
These next couple chapters are probably gonna whittle down his human status huh?
The story is def skewing in the direction of the bad ending being the "canonical" one. And if Tyler were to pop up, I'd imagine it'd be during one of these chapters.
I also don't know how the good ending is gonna happen. I doubt Molly will change so unless she does some real fucked shit that makes Carmen revaluate. Maybe she tries to mentally break him and the endings are separated based on whether or not she succeeded?
Finally, I wonder if Molly justifies her own actions because he's technically aroused by the way he's treated? Or is she genuinely that malicious? Or does she really just live flippantly and everything is just going how she wants?
[Report This]Date: June 08 2023 3:46 AM Title: The Little Man in the Boot
Formatting came through all fine reading on mobile.
I love the dynamics of the characters. Molly taking pleasure in reducing Aiden to a shrunken cuckold and having Carmen's approval as he's betrayed by his dick. I feel the 'bad' ending (my favourites) will have this be the permanent situation with Carmen becoming indifferent or forever unaware to Aiden's suffering.
I'm honestly wondering how a 'good' ending pans out and if Molly sticks around or the sadism becomes more consensual.
Date: June 06 2023 4:38 AM Title: Cold Feet
"And there wasn’t anything wrong with that, he repeated internally."
Yea, I think this is def all going according to Molly's plan. Aiden constantly repeating to himself that her leaving him alone is due to his warning just sounds like cope.
And this chapter confirms she knows he has(had) a crush on Carmen so she probably knew a talk like the one that just happened was going to occur. Especially if she figured that Carmen has a crush on her.
For the bad ending, I'm assuming Molly gets what she wants through that crush.
She is one evil bitch bro omg
Author's Response:
I don't want to spoil too much, but yea Aiden might just be overestimating how seriously Molly took his threats. And he seems to have misjudged exactly where he stands in the only relationships he has left. Certainly seems like Molly getting her way would be the bad ending, doesnt it?
Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: June 06 2023 4:17 AM Title: The Event
Yo, what happened to your twitter? Miss the chats :( also as always, perfect story
Author's Response:
Hopped off twitter a couple years ago by this point. I just wasn't enjoying the site anymore. I'm over on deviantart now though if you feel like starting a chat over there! But I'm glad to know you're still enjoying the story. I'm working on a commission at the moment that I know will be right up your alley so keep an eye out!
[Report This]Date: June 03 2023 3:20 AM Title: Pushing Back
Aiden is pretty tough for a tampon.
Author's Response:
I reckon you'd just have to be pretty tough for a job like that, eh?
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: June 03 2023 12:34 AM Title: Pushing Back
House arrest up against her ass/asshole or maybe unawarely up against Carmen's sounds fitting.
Author's Response:
It does, doesnt it. Here's to hoping that Molly gets her way!
Thanks for reading!!
Date: June 01 2023 2:19 PM Title: The Gym Incident
Wait I think I have a better prediction. Carmen does that thing she did before where she does the shrinking ritual without paying attention to him (probably because she's mad or on the phone again) and he inevitably gets shrunk to the point of not being able to heard without effort. And Molly threatens him as well regarding him telling her anyway.
Eventually, Molly convinces Carmen to let Tyler move in and he kinda takes Aiden's position as their fwb but also plays around with him. This is all assuming the ending isn't happy anyway cause I'd rather Aiden find a way back as Tyler shrinks(maybe he goes too far with Aiden so Carmen does something) and he's just given to Molly so she gets off Aiden.
Author's Response:
Hey there, first off, I'm glad you enjoyed the gym chapter. I've considered including it in several of my stories but always felt compelled not to. Not sure why, but it's good to know it was well received.
Second, in regards to your predictions, I've actually been planning on doing two endings. One good and one bad. Or at least, one kind and one cruel. I've had two specific ending scenarios I wanted to explore and I didnt really feel like I could get both of them into one ending. That being said, I don't hate the idea of Tyler coming back in some way. Perhaps we'll see him again before it's all over.
Anyways, thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: June 01 2023 5:01 AM Title: The Gym Incident
Wow a giant couple chapter! Did not expect that from you but I really enjoyed it! Even "The Tenant" didn't have that. You should do more!
Since it's called it's referred to as an incident with a "The" before it, I'm assuming this is a turning point? Carmen will probably get pretty upset too.
Since none of your stories besides Losing Control has a good ending, I'm assuming this one will have a bad one. So, I'm predicting Carmen moves out and leaves him behind for whatever reason and Tyler moves in as they use him as a toy.
Not my wanted ending but seems pretty likely.
Date: May 19 2023 10:48 PM Title: Experimentation
He's such a lucky bastard!!!
Author's Response:
We'll see about that... Too much of a good thing and all that nonsense. Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: May 19 2023 12:58 AM Title: Experimentation
It's good to start writing stories again.
Author's Response:
Agreed, it gets harder as life continues to pile on, but when the inspiration is there, I hope to get the most out of it. Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: May 18 2023 9:41 AM Title: The Event
Always awesome to see more stories by you, particularly those that are profoundly Omanahan. How long can we expect this one to go?
Exciting start, I enjoy the dynamic already and I'm a sucker for a character who bites off more than they can chew.
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for the praise! I'd expect this one to go to probably about 14 chapters, depending on how long the last few story sections end up being. And I'm glad you enjoy the concept. The whole, too much of a good thing is one of my favorites as well. Thanks so much for reading!!
Date: May 17 2023 8:23 PM Title: The Event
Loving it so far! Excited for more soon!
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it! I've got a decent bit of the story already fleshed out already, and even the structure of an ending. I always struggle with writing an ending for my stories, so having this one mostly fleshed out makes me think we should certainly see this one wrapped up in the next couple weeks. Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: May 17 2023 4:32 AM Title: The Event
Wow! Starting right in with the fart content, I love it. Excited to see where this goes with a start like that.
Hoping Molly's sadism ends up putting Aiden up Carmen's crack some more. Maybe in the back of her panties for a while?
Author's Response: If there's one truth in this universe, it's that an Omanahan story is gonna have some giantess farts in there somewhere. Glad you enjoyed the first couple chapters. Thanks for reading!!