[Report This]Date: September 26 2023 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: Everything Is Ready
Do you plan on continuing this story? Willing to pay as well!
[Report This]Date: July 25 2023 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: Everything Is Ready
These haters make no sense! Please don’t listen to them. I think the writing is fantastic and the engagement between the couples, characters, etc… are great! I love unaware masturbation, insertion, etc… and think you’re killing it! Literally can’t wait for more chapters!!!
[Report This]Date: June 04 2023 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 1: Everything Is Ready
I have no idea how people are so okay with the constant sexualization of minors in this community.
It's bad enough when people write about characters that look underage but are TOTALLY old enough, but this is purely a whole chapter writing about a minors penis, seriously? It's sickening, and talking about how large it is too, like wtf
Author's Response:
You already said you don’t like the story, why are you still reading?
Oliver is 20 btw, he already graduated high school
[Report This]Date: May 23 2023 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Everything Is Ready
Big fan of couples stories but this is just embarrassing. The dialogue and the writing of any intimacy is painful to read to.
I implore you to look at any real world couples
Author's Response:
Sorry that I'm an amateur author I guess? I've never really written anything in my life before, so this was a fun way for me to participate in a community that I'm a part of. I appreciate any constructive criticism to try and improve, but you mostly just insulted my writing, which wasn't very helpful. Thanks for letting me know I can be better, I'll work on it.
I implore you to find other stories that live up to your standards.
[Report This]Date: May 20 2023 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Everything Is Ready
If I see a shrunken couple story, I read it. Good so far. I hope Tyler isn’t dead.
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know you've enjoyed it so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know you've enjoyed it so far!
Date: May 20 2023 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 3: Escape
OMG! Is Tyler dead? Great chapter, please, continue, please! I can't wait the next chapter! Please, please!
Author's Response:
Still working on it!
Date: May 16 2023 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Everything Is Ready
So great! Promising start! I can't wait the next chapter! Please, continue, please! I like your story!
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for letting me know you like it! I plan on continuing, and it's a lot easier to keep going with encouragement from people like you
[Report This]Date: May 15 2023 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: Everything Is Ready
Amazing start to the story! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: May 15 2023 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Everything Is Ready
I get where your penname comes from.
It's smally smalls, isn't it?
Author's Response:
Did you mean to say Scotty Smalls? If so, then yes that's the inspiration
[Report This]Date: May 15 2023 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 1: Everything Is Ready
Promising start, interested to see where this goes
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for the encouragement! Hope you keep liking it!