Date: September 30 2023 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
Man I really liked this story. I hope its continued in some way.
Date: September 24 2023 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 4
This hole story line is great. I enjoy reading. I like how the characters are not overly gigantic or microscopic small. it's like this world could really exist.
Date: September 15 2023 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am also an admirer of your work and I am also glad that you are back.
Author's Response:
It is always good to hear I have fans! Appreciate the comment :)
Date: May 04 2023 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
Let's see what happens next time. Can't wait.
Date: May 01 2023 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is going nicely. Keep it up.
Date: May 01 2023 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok so this is A good start. I would like to see more.
Date: May 01 2023 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
At first, I didn’t read your username before clicking the story. After reading the chapter notes at the end and finally looking at your name, I was stunned after all these years you’re back! Happy to see you and with a new story to boot! Loved your “Close” story and was liking your Retreat story as well (will you continue now that you’re back?).
As for your new story, I’m liking the intro and your new characters. Looks like you still have your touch after all of these years :)
Can’t wait to see more!
Author's Response:
It's good to see I still have a fan or two, glad you are enjoying things so far. And an addition to Retreat could certainly happen in the future!