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Reviewer: 123youjizz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2023 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is now one of my top favorite vore/giantess stories.  Hope to see more of your work in the future.

Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2023 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great story. Love the disparity between the very willing, semi-willing, somewhat unwilling and very unwilling participants. I like to do rewrites and I’ve always wanted to do a live stream giantess vore story, but I don’t think I could do any better. This is very well written and well-paced. Great job LPM.

Reviewer: kbDArt Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2023 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'll second DrTritium's sentiments. I'm only about 35% of the way through this one, so I'll wait to rate until I've completed. That said, I love Adelaide's confidence and seductiveness.

Reviewer: DrTritium Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2023 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

You are a very talented writer. This story is a master class in pacing for erotic storytelling. There's enough time building up the characters to increase the payoff to their arcs without bogging the flow of the story down. I also love the set-up that gives Adelaide the flexibility to be both cruel and gentle. Really well done.

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