Date: May 09 2023 7:12 PM Title: Ch 6. Shifting Perspective
Good story, very well written. I like the focus on the couple's friends and their reaction to mixed size dating. I assume that ex-boyfriend is going to become a problem.
Author's Response:
Thank you. That's a fair assumption, but I don't plan on doing anything more with him. I just wanted to use him for the scene at the end of chapter 5. Part of my goal with this story is to keep the conflicts emotional rather than physical, so characters like him are great for drama, but I don't want to have characters trying to physically harm each other.
[Report This]Date: April 20 2023 1:14 PM Title: Ch 1. Two-Inch Crush
Loved reading the story, however I think a little bit more description here and there would do rather nicely.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I agree I could do better with describing things more. I'm always afraid of getting too wordy or ruining the pacing that I end up going too hard in the other direction. I'll keep this in mind and try to improve for future chapters.
[Report This]Date: April 13 2023 9:14 PM Title: Ch. 4: The Morning After
This is a great story. I hope you continue
Author's Response:
Thank you. I will.
Date: April 09 2023 7:30 PM Title: Ch 1. Two-Inch Crush
Really like this story. Cant wait to see more. I like the idea of Sasha being so against it too. Adds more drama to it. What would she do to her friends tiny boyfriend, or any tiny, that she got her hands on?
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. A lot of this story's conflicts are going to revolve around how others respond to their relationship and how the characters develop through these interactions.
[Report This]Date: April 09 2023 1:56 AM Title: Ch 1. Two-Inch Crush
I really enjoyed this and look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you. More is on the way.