[Report This]Date: March 08 2023 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 4: A Day Under a Hard-Working Women
I'm loving the story! I liked the narrative of the mother already being at the limit of her son's misbehavior, I hope he spends a lot of time under her feet.
Author's Response:
I'm happy you're enjoying the story. There will be plenty of foot action especially in the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm happy you're enjoying the story. There will be plenty of foot action especially in the next chapter.
Date: March 08 2023 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 4: A Day Under a Hard-Working Women
Great punishment. Hopefully his mom "doesn't" forget he's with her if she gets lucky on her date
Author's Response:
Thank you for the comment. I'm happy you're enjoying the story. Well a date can be quite distracting, especially when its been months since any romantic interaction.
Date: March 05 2023 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Incident
great setup, lots of good details. Cant wait to meet the family. Also, who is Hailey?
Author's Response:
Thank you for the comment.
Hailey is introduced in the 2nd chapter, chapter 1 is supposed to be in the form of a report, only introducing the main character.
Chapter 2 and 3 are up.