[Report This]Date: March 02 2026 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Incident
Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic. Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level! Feel free to reach out to me via Discord (my username is avablaise_98 ) or by email (avablaise9@gmail.com). Hope to hear from you soon
[Report This]Date: March 08 2023 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 4: A Day Under a Hard-Working Women
I'm loving the story! I liked the narrative of the mother already being at the limit of her son's misbehavior, I hope he spends a lot of time under her feet.
Author's Response:
I'm happy you're enjoying the story. There will be plenty of foot action especially in the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm happy you're enjoying the story. There will be plenty of foot action especially in the next chapter.
Date: March 08 2023 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 4: A Day Under a Hard-Working Women
Great punishment. Hopefully his mom "doesn't" forget he's with her if she gets lucky on her date
Author's Response:
Thank you for the comment. I'm happy you're enjoying the story. Well a date can be quite distracting, especially when its been months since any romantic interaction.
Date: March 05 2023 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Incident
great setup, lots of good details. Cant wait to meet the family. Also, who is Hailey?
Author's Response:
Thank you for the comment.
Hailey is introduced in the 2nd chapter, chapter 1 is supposed to be in the form of a report, only introducing the main character.
Chapter 2 and 3 are up.