[Report This]Date: March 09 2023 3:04 AM Title: CHAPTER 9 (Finale): Regretful Realization
I’ll be honest, I never expected this to be the ending. I loved it plus it was a breath of fresh air.
Having the woman who kept messing up invention wise and had all the power through admin privilege.
Taking the role of Tinykin and not only risking herself but even being at the literal foot of Kyoto and Hellion while acknowledging how hard the two especially Hellion in particular had it since he was trapped especially given she was one of those problems.
Most female giantess don’t have chapters like this in other stories where they see through the perspective of the main character/victim.
Like I said this was a breath of fresh air and I thank you for it.
Author's Response:
I thank you heartily. Back when I was still pitching ideas in my head and with HellionPrime, there was another way this chapter could have gone.
In it Emily would have spoken to Hellion directly and told him about her plan to shrink herself without her usual Admin tricks, partially to show him that “it’s not that bad” or something ti that effect. Hellion promptly would have taken advantage of the situation to call and enter Kyoto, and then either tell her about Emily and have her deliberately be a little mean and “punish” her while pretending to he unaware or not tell her anything and deliberately leave her unaware of Emily, either way letting the Mech have control for the duration.
This would have been a more direct “Hellion gets revenge on Emily for the shit she put him through,” but it was decided that the route I took was better.
Date: March 01 2023 5:46 PM Title: CHAPTER 7: Armour Agonies
Nice! A bit sad not to see the stomach, but this was still a great chapter!
Author's Response: LOL, I only now noticed you have been the only person to review/respond. Still glad you like it, one of my personal favourites will be released Friday, and then the Finale Tuesday.
Date: February 24 2023 11:10 PM Title: CHAPTER 6: Miniaturization Mourning
Wonderful. I hope it is swallow, since I am looking forward to seeing full tour vore, but I guess I won't see that. Hope Hellion is still double shrunk in the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Sadly the way I wrote this every chapter is self-contained, weeks apart. Also a heads up, I do not do scat so Full Tour is not an option. There shall be Vore though.
Date: February 17 2023 6:01 PM Title: CHAPTER 4: Spherical Suffering
Nice. Looks like Kyoto and Hellion are going to be washed in the laundry. I hope Hellion ends up lost in the laundry and thus have to deal with his normal size and an unaware regular size human. I wonder what would happen if McKenzie takes the bag with Kyoto and Hellion outside of the game area with them inside.
Author's Response:
That does sound interesting, but I sadly need to inform you that each chapter takes place weeks apart. Emily needs her development time after all to make her upgrades/updates for Hellion.
You do raise an interesting point about being taken out of the "play area," and I do not currently have an answer to that.
Date: February 08 2023 5:13 PM Title: CHAPTER 1: Car Calamity
Nice. I really hope Kyoto loses Hellion again, especially if Emily doesn't know and he ends up being swallowed by an unaware player. Especially if it becomes full tour and he survives
Author's Response:
I can assure you that this is just the tip of the iceberg when it comes to this story. It won’t even just be Hellion under threat!