[Report This]Date: February 06 2023 11:34 PM Title: Sunday
Amazing start to the story! Love this character style you have implenented and i am always a fan of unaware stuck to feet. Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Trust me, I’m a fan of “unaware, stuck to feet”, too. This is the first story where I’ve really begun exploring the family dynamic with a playful, devious family member taking advantage of another family member. The aunt angle allows for a good dynamic of guardianship and a more mature person taking care of someone younger.
Thanks for reading, and for the review. Feel free to critique the remaining chapters as I post them.
[Report This]Date: February 06 2023 9:36 PM Title: Sunday
I loved it! I loved that even though it was a chapter, it had a lot of content, I'm looking forward to the next sufferings of the little one with his aunt's feet haha
Author's Response: Well, my original plan was to have each day of the week be a single chapter, but while I do like chapters to have a lot of content, I don’t want them to be so long that it turns readers off. Most days will end up being split into about two chapters, but probably no more than that: I do have a lot to include, but I don’t want the days to just drag on and on.
[Report This]Date: February 06 2023 7:12 PM Title: Sunday
Love the devious aunt angle. Very good writing. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Yes, I wanted to explore the “playful yet devious” family member trope for a few upcoming stories, whether it be a sister, aunt, or cousin; or non-related family, like a sister/mother-in-law.
Feel free to add a critique of the writing style or shrunken encounters moving forward if you leave a review in the future.