[Report This]Date: January 19 2023 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
INCREDIBLE! INCREDIBLE! I didn't know until now that there are people
in this world like me, who wish to be around giant women and even be
eaten by them! Incredible, I'm so pleased to have discovered it!
Well,
about the story, I found it to be pretty entertaining, and I liked a
lot the way it was written (I'm not American and my English sucks, so I
don't know if my opinion on how the story is written accounts XD). The
ending not clearly showing if it all was just another game or if this
time the man is really gone into her wife's stomach... thrilling! Of
course, I'm imagining that he's gone and I envy him a lot, but who
knows? Anyway, I'm imagining the ending I'd like to have if I was in his
place: being a woman's treat is for sure the ultimate pleasure I'd
have!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'd certainly say that this was the end for our protagonist, but like you said, it sure was a treat! Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: January 15 2023 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the idea, and the story was good. I just feel like it would have been better with a little more clever dialogue so that it wasn't so obvious what was going to happen. Still, a decent effort.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the read and the feedback! Certainly wasn't going for any sort of surprise twist ending, but rather a straightforward vore scenario. Might take a swing at a more in depth vore story down the road sometime.