[Report This]Date: November 27 2009 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good job.
Author's Response:
You have been a busy boy...i really appreciate the time you have spent reading my short stories thank you.
Amanda.
Date: November 11 2009 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
How do you think this up?
I was baited with great suspense in every paragraph of it.
"I have my husband to thank for that" is quite a clever play on words.
Author's Response:
I'm not sure what gave me this idea i think it was because of a argument between us,its this kind of thing that sends my brain in to writing mode,Andrew loved reading this yarn he thought it was very sexy.
Amanda.
Date: October 18 2009 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
MADAM AMANDA
its great story , consuming your husband is great
MAAM i wish if i am at the place of your husband
i will please you mximum before you consume
Maam i want to turn in your urine and shit
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review i would love to consume you and reduce your body to my waste.i am sure you would help me to go to the toilet when i was finished with you.
please do not use such a crude word as sxxx its not nice and i'm sure other forum members would agree.
Amanda.
Date: October 04 2009 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is the best one you've done so far. I love the more detailed mouth play. You kept the mystery about how he shrank. It's all implied. Very original build-up. Explored the character's dual opinion of Brandon. A human black widow, perhaps.
I always thought Jack and the Beanstalk would have played better, if the giant's wife had been the one who wanted to eat Jack.
Author's Response:
Haha that's a nice thought about jack and the beanstalk.
i was inspired by a friend to write this story.
Being married to a loving husband it would, in my opinion be a very cruel and heartless act to consume him after having sex.I did get very aroused whilst putting into words my feelings, it was a very fullfilling story to write in many ways which i cannot describe here.
Amanda.
[Report This]Date: September 28 2009 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well Amanda to clarify my simple review earlier I will start by assuming you are female, based on your name; although I have met men who use a female name as a screename. Now that that's over with, let me hust say I am simply stunned by your story as it shows events from a female perpective. The problem is that while I enjoy the perspective I dont really like this type of story but it was brilliantly wriiten and for that I give you a...
Author's Response:
Thank you Gadgetman i can appreciate your viewpoint regarding the stories content,i myself have similar views on some of the subject matter contained in stories posted on this forum.In an answer to your question regarding my sex,i am indeed female with all the usuall charectaristics which defines a woman.I am not able to write from another view point(male perspective)because i wouldn't now how,i write with my emotions which tend to set the stories direction.I once again wish to thank you for responding take care.
Amanda.
Date: September 24 2009 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
O_O
Author's Response:
Thanks for this...i think? .
Amanda.
[Report This]Date: September 24 2009 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you amanda I love this story and they way you wrote down your feelings and most of all its about me thank you so much
Author's Response:
Thank you tinybrandon, may be one day i shall come and pay you a surprice visit, of course i shall leave alone with you safely tucked away inside.
Amanda.