Reviewer: Bridget_drkW Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2023 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 3

I don’t usually care for micro city stories but this one was wonderful. I loved how almost all of it was experienced through Matylda and Natalia, which both come off as strong, intelligent, and fascinating women. 

Very well written; I’m looking forward to seeing more!

Reviewer: Kamaeli Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2023 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

Cool! Thanks for taking the time to make this available in English!

Love the scenario with scientists and micros, and I think the way you described Matylda's thought process on the micros being powerless to their whims (and by her willingness to join in) was excellent.

At the start of the third chapter, when it said "When holding the city in the grasps of their hands and french kissing the townspeople farewell got a bit old", did you mean that they were literally making out with the city? It was a little unclear to me.

And do you have any plans to come back to this story and add any more chapters? I think it is a fantastic start with great potential.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! The part about french kissing the tinies was just me trying to be poetic about the girls putting people in their mouths, it's not meant to be taken literally. The story is mostly finished, albeit I might add a chapter describing the experience from the point of view of the shrunken people in the future. I have lots of ideas that I'd like to develop and things I'm working on, so I tend not to stay in one place when it comes to creating stuff.