Reviews For Hermione's Snack
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Reviewer: johnson Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2009 3:54 PM Title: Hermione's Snack

This is excellent.  I wish you'd make chapter 2!

Reviewer: Tsavo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2009 12:27 AM Title: Hermione's Snack

Very entertaining read. You described things very well, and the dialogue didn't feel so stilted and awkward as it does in some fan-fics. Excellent use of body language as well. Don't see that used t full potential all that often.

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2009 1:54 AM Title: Hermione's Snack

I agree with ralf wolfs, much better formatting, made for a delightful read.

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