[Report This]Date: December 26 2022 6:32 AM Title: The City of Caravia
Always so excited to see a new Tera story here. This is super well written and I can't wait to see where it goes. I really like the idea that she's so incomprehensibly big to them that they may as well be bacteria, and she may as well be a god. I hope in the future she decides to share some godlike fun with her wife as well. Thanks again for sharing!
[Report This]Date: December 26 2022 6:32 AM Title: The City of Caravia
Always so excited to see a new Tera story here. This is super well written and I can't wait to see where it goes. I really like the idea that she's so incomprehensibly big to them that they may as well be bacteria, and she may as well be a god. I hope in the future she decides to share some godlike fun with her wife as well. Thanks again for sharing!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: December 25 2022 4:41 PM Title: The City of Caravia
Now that's a great start... The first two chapters are very promising. I really like your descriptions, especially Milan's body which is PERFECT for a giantess (exaggerated and awe inspiring). Not much into mega and terra stuff, but you seem to know what you're doing.
Anyway, keep up the good work! Looking forward to the next chapters!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I trust I'll be able to convert you to the wonders of giga/tera sizes~
[Report This]Date: December 25 2022 1:12 PM Title: The City of Caravia
Amazing levels of description. Always great to see for any story that wants to go in more depth to its world building. I don’t have any complaints, my only subjective nitpick is that a mix of some smaller paragraphs added in would be good too. Helps make the writing stand out more. But that’s just me. I’m excited to see where this goes!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm still getting a handle on how to best interpose longer and shorter paragraphs, so as to not overwhelm the reader - I'll keep an eye out for that.
[Report This]Date: December 24 2022 7:55 PM Title: The City of Caravia
Really love the immersion into their devotion! A lot of people skimp on the details for this sort of thing, but the most interesting thing to me is always how being a godlike being actually changes society rather than just adding some giant monster who you occasionally have to run from, but otherwise life is the same as it was prior.
Author's Response:
Thank you! And yeah, for this story I tried to go hard on the worldbuilding, the society and, as you said, the immersion. I want chapter 1 to really put the reader in the shoes of a simple, humble mortal who is about to experience a cataclysm of unbelievable proportions.