[Report This]Date: March 18 2023 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story, beautifully written. It is a novel idea for a story. I will make one minor slight - the pacing at times seems to jump, which makes it seem as though there was a pressure to finish.
Was going to rate this a 9 due to pacing, but I will rate a 10 to make for the anonymous rating, which looked to be an accident.
Date: November 23 2018 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
That's an unique story! For the first time I read a story involving fairies that way, and liked it too much!
[Report This]Date: October 07 2011 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Beautifully Written Story, Enough Said
Author's Response:
Thank you. Enough said
[Report This]Date: October 21 2009 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hi LadyPrey, I read this one a while back, but just revisited it. I really love it!
Author's Response:
Hi Scrumptious, you're one of my favorite authors and often re-read yours.
Date: October 12 2009 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
I think this is the most beautifully written story I've seen so far.
I love the setting, and the way you've described the garden scenery. Fantastic piece of work.
Author's Response:
Thank you Timescribe; you yourself know the challenge of fleshing out your own memories with a little imaginative dressing. That's what makes writing so interesting. I love your writing, by the way and I miss it; are you all written out?
[Report This]Date: September 19 2006 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good story Lady Prey. I read this back in the days before Shrinktopia and enjoyed in then.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it, Anonymous.