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Reviewer: Poe00069 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2023 4:56 PM Title: Life in the Community Chest: Part 1

Hi, 

I love this style of erotica writing and much prefer it to the more "rapid porn" styles that are typical in the genre. You directly touch on how the problems that contributed to the failures all of his previous relationships have not been addressed in part 4, by his silence (however at the current size can anyone hear him at all?), I'm dying to see how that plays out with the the rest of the more visceral reactions that are in store for him. His current size was a little difficult to figure out, afaik monopoly pieces are only 1/4 inch high.

Please continue!

Thank you!

po

Reviewer: Iunno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2022 3:53 AM Title: Life in the Community Chest: Part 3

Ah I think I get what Kenzie is trying to do. She's trying to make him see where he messed up such as not being too thorough.

Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2022 12:03 AM Title: Life in the Community Chest: Part 3

Getting very interesting (and more spicy!), I'm looking forward to more uploads!

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 10 2022 4:29 AM Title: Life in the Community Chest: Part 2

Kind of confusing; yet very intriguing.  Will be interesting as to how the story progresses.  



Author's Response:

Hello! Thank you for reviewing. If it's not too much of a hassle, could you identify the source of the confusion? I'm trying to improve my writing for the future.

Reviewer: memesRlife Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2022 6:35 PM Title: Life in the Community Chest: Part 1

This is intresting so far, I want to know about his relationship with the chick whp shrunl him and how they got to this point.

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