Date: April 05 2023 10:35 PM Title: Part 1
I love it too much...thanks...i hope she shrink her husband too
[Report This]Date: November 29 2022 7:34 AM Title: Part 2
Whoa! Just read both part 1 and 2 and this story definitely appeals to me! Nothing better than an attractive mom of one of your friends. Completely relatable as I wished I had my own shrink Ray.
Also, I love how horny Jessica is! Once she see’s Eli’s friends, she decides to use both of them as sex toys!
Wyatt is the lucky one so far! Dude got dropped into her panties, then pushed into her vagina, then into her mouth and then shoved into her ass. He went into every hole already! Lucky guy!
Its easy to imagine that Nolan and especially Wyatt would enjoy this situation, but what about Eli? I’m curious if he will be turned on, or will he be appalled that his mom is doing all this.
Story seems a bit fast-paced which is usually good, but could lead to an author running out of ideas quickly. So I hope you got plenty of possibilities for our characters in the future.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 29 2022 3:03 AM Title: Part 2
I really liked Nolan getting lost in Jessica's asshole, then Wyatt being sent in to search for Nolan after helped give Jessica an orgasm and was covered in her spasm.
Not much into mother / son interactions (nor father / daughter for that matter); but at least Eli only reached up Jessica's asshole to grab Wyatt's leg to pull him and Nolan out.
I'm surprised they didn't love being up Jessica's ass more than they did; but reality and fantasy are often far apart and two different experiences.
As to your earlier question (in your previous reply to my comments), about the father showing up, I can only recommend you write stories that you yourself enjoy, and your intended audience will find itself over time.
I can only tell you I do not care for male giant stories, nor male on male interactions. There's nothing wrong with them as far as I am concerned. They are simply not my cup of tea. I prefer women, especially mature women such as Jessica.
If you really want the father involved, perhaps Jessica could shrink him too.
Personally, I think Eli should go back in his jar, and leave Jessica with Nolan and Wyatt, and perhaps the father depending how his character proceeds.
Your grammar has greatly improved over your first chapter, nicely done.
Looking forward to Jessica's bath.
[Report This]Date: November 27 2022 3:24 AM Title: Part 1
Nice, rather slutty story (considering Jessica's actions so far as a MILF with her son's two friends).
Dropping one in her cleavage and the other down her panties is always a great fantasy. Can't wait to read where things go from here.
You do have a lot of grammatical errors which make your story a bit confusing to read; but nothing to bad that prevents the easy flow of your story.
You don't go into many details, especially about the description of Jessica other than she is an older woman with large DD breasts, bleached blonde hair, and a killer ass. That leaves a lot to the readers imagination, which is a nice touch. I myself imagine Jessica as one step above trailer trash.
Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comments. I will be going into more detail and fewer
quotes in my next parts. Expect part 2 to be way more graphic. How do you feel if the dad shows up in a later part?