[Report This]Date: November 16 2022 9:39 PM Title: Rose Tinted
Another amazing chapter! Carmen is such a fun character. Selfish and strong, but somewhere deep down she wants to be good natured. I’m my mind, I know logically that Kyle and Sam have a right to resent her for bullying them growing up, but it’s impossible not to feel for Carmen’s loneliness.
Plus, in-shoe entrapment is just plain good old fashioned fun. And being artificially horny with your spouse while trapped inside the sweaty shoe of your former bully? *Chef’s Kiss*
Great work as always! Plus I also went through your profile and read your dnd style fantasy shrinking story. Loved it!
Author's Response: It's been a long road for the trio and they've got more ahead, Carmen does want to be good but she's also... well she's Carmen, it gets in the way. And yeah in shoe entrapment is always fun, glad you liked Champion of the Goddess, a fairly silly story but one I enjoyed writing.
[Report This]Date: November 16 2022 6:50 AM Title: Rose Tinted
Oh my God I’m so emotionally invested in this story. Carmen is one of your best written characters yet and I love how the much the plot depends on her soul prevailing or not. I think this might be your best one since abduction.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I really wanted to hit some harder emotional notes with this one, most of my stories are fairly lighthearted affairs and I wanted to try one with a little more seriousness to it. Carmen's internal struggle will ultimately be doom or salvation for all three of our protagonists, I'm glad you're enjoying her so far!
[Report This]Date: November 15 2022 7:09 AM Title: Prologue: High School
I just finished the most recent chapter and once again Greenanon has hit it out of the park! Their character writing has always been their strong suit and I really enjoy this faux tsundere archetype that they have going on with Carmen, and Sammy and Kyle are also a great way to round out the main cast. I usually skip prologue chapters but this time I had to read it, and I really like how you can tell that these characters have matured and changed from high school while still feeling like they're still the same, it's a difficult task and Greenanon easily completes it. I'm excited to see where this series goes, and more excited to see where the story, and fetish content (I believe this is their first time attempting multisize if that's what they're hinting at with chapter 6 and I'm Incredibly excited for that), twists and turns like most of their stories do!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I debated the prologue chapter vs using flashbacks, but I felt like a somewhat complete history between the three characters was needed to understand some plot points.
Also yes we will have some good multisize action throughout this story! It's not my first time with it, there was some in the later Conquest of Earth plotlines.
[Report This]Date: November 13 2022 2:31 AM Title: Old Habits
The juxtaposition between Carmen backing up the nerds in the meeting and how she treats them later in the chapter is interesting. She doesn't understand that when they say 'no' to her, it's just as earnest as the 'no' they gave to Richard. She thinks about them completely differently.
It totally makes sense why Melinda took risks with who she allowed to get the gene therapy. Being around situations like the Seacourts on a regular basis would make almost anybody want to help if they could. Really sucks about her husband as well, it would be devastating to walk away unscathed from an accident that took a loved one. I think I'd carry a lot of survivor's guilt if something like that happened to me, even though I know it's irrational.
Author's Response:
Carmen is struggling with some different feelings towards our other protags, in some ways she's grown since she last saw them, in other ways she hasn't, or hasn't enough. Melinda was stuck in a difficult position at the beginning of the gene therapy, obviously most people would not want someone like Carmen having superpowers, on the other hand the number of sad stories that can be prevented makes it difficult to turn anyone down, particularly early on when they didn't have as many. Melinda carries a lot of guilt for a lot of things that happened, even with healing powers and all that strength sometimes tragedy still strikes.
[Report This]Date: November 11 2022 4:41 AM Title: Prologue: High School
Just got to get this off my own chest, but I really enjoyed all of your stories even the ones left unfinished they got a certain taste to them that just pulled you in not just for the sexual scenes but also for characters involved in the stories, as for these three I have a feeling that at the end of it all it going to be a three way relationship or FF/m aka two Mrs.westwoods, also realize that Carmen make seven figures as a valkyrie that like one to ten million dollars a year so these three are millionaires already in there twenties, I wish I was one of them at that point.
Author's Response:
I don't think I gave an exact sum that Carmen makes yearly as a Valkyrie but you can imagine it's close to what a specialist doctor makes, so probably high six figures and her net worth is a million or more. Kyle and Samantha are that next level of rich from being successful App developers, obviously we'd all like to be them lol.
[Report This]Date: November 10 2022 8:09 PM Title: Locked In
Amazing😇, a amazon/giantess with carmens smug attitude is what i love reading about, so beautifully written. cant wait to read more!! 😊
Author's Response:
Yeah Carmen is fun to write, she's super teasing and mean but also has some redeeming qualities. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: November 10 2022 3:45 PM Title: Locked In
A surprisingly wholesome experience, considering Carmen's desire for taking revenge on Kyle and Sam. You cannot stay truly mad when you are essentially a superhuman who is already set for life, I guess. Also, an indicator of her actual feelings towards the two.
Great job, always a pleasure to read a chapter of yours. Cheers!
Author's Response:
They're in something of a honeymoon phase of their interaction, Carmen has just saved their lives and they feel like they can trust her a bit. She still carries a bit of a grudge but it's softened and yeah her real feelings for the two are on display. We've got some bumpy road before the end but I think it'll make people happy.
[Report This]Date: November 10 2022 2:55 AM Title: Locked In
Carmen is perfect for this role. She's just the right amount of smug, cocky, and teasing while not being straight mean. I'm really looking forward to more interactions between the three and the character development you're so good at writing!
Author's Response:
Thanks I really enjoy writing her. She's definitely got her issues to work through but she's not as mean as she appears at first.
[Report This]Date: November 09 2022 4:17 PM Title: A Rock and a Hard Place
Another terrific entry. You’ll probably be seeing a lot of reviews from me, but this is simply one of my favorite stories I’ve come across in quite some time, so I feel the need comment on the things that I like.
First off, loved the kaiju battle between the giants. Typically the only thing I care about in giantess stories is the fetish action, but I was sort of getting like King Kong on Skull island sort of vibes if that makes sense. Definitely eager to see more hand to hand combat down the line.
Second, the utility of the Valkyrie’s pheromone laden sweat leaves me incredibly excited for the portions of the chapters that actually are pure fetish content. Sweat, feet and armpits are excellent and I hope Carmen’s ass makes and appearance at some point as well.
Looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response:
Review every chapter if you want I love reading reviews lol. Anyways yeah we'll see lots of wild fetish content in addition to the plot, the pheromone thing is fun to play with.
[Report This]Date: November 09 2022 1:33 AM Title: Intertwined
Loving this so far. Carmen got what she deserved in high school and it'll be satisfying watching her (presumably) reach that conclusion at some point. Seems like she probably genuinely liked Kyle and Samantha, but massively misunderstood the affect her actions were having on them.
They sure weren't too picky about who got to become a Valkyrie, but given how rare the genes are it makes sense. It's almost certainly been a massive net positive overall, even considering any who have gone rogue. I do wonder how they're able to operate with such minimal supervision, given their ridiculous power.
Author's Response:
During the beginning they couldn't really afford to be picky, they're a little pickier in the "modern" part of the story so it's up to you if they'd have still taken Carmen, obviously she's had some eyes on her for some time.
As for Carmen herself yeah she hasn't quite reached the conclusion that she was in fact that asshole, but hopefully we'll get there.
[Report This]Date: November 08 2022 4:42 PM Title: Prologue: High School
This story is already so compelling!!! Your characters and plots are always so second to none. Your sense of tension, pacing and story structure is so good I’m always addictively pulled along with the story.
Author's Response:
Thanks, this one is like I've said an attempt at a darker story, so this one will probably have more tension than a lot of my other ones, but with an ending I hope makes it all worth it.
[Report This]Date: November 08 2022 1:36 AM Title: Prologue: High School
Great start! I love your writing, you're definitely one of the size-authors who "gets it" in all the same ways that appeal to me about the fetish.
I'm excited to see you venturing into
something a little different, though I do hope you also continue your
normal style as well! I loved how you set up in the first chapter
Carmen needing the serum as a shoe in for her realizing what was
happening in chapter 3! Great "show don't tell"!
Not asking for spoilers but hopefully not all the R rated things in this story are unpleasant;).
Author's Response:
I will probably return to my more comfortable goofy adventure type stories after this one, but I've been wanting to branch out a bit. Oh and yes there will be more enjoyable X-rated scenes for our protags in the story.
[Report This]Date: November 08 2022 12:19 AM Title: Intertwined
"You half-assed a group project I tried to force you to do for me and I ended up failing the class! This isn't my fault for being awful for years, letting my grades slip such that one project could fail me, or trying to bully you into doing the project for me! You ruined my life by making me spend a brief period working in the exact kind of job you'd expect a high school bully to rightfully end up in, all because you didn't do A quality work pretty much entirely for the benefit of a bully who only got worse from a starting point of locking you in a locker for long periods and breaking your stuff."
Carmen is legitimately funny, horrible but funny. Hopefully she manages to earn her part of the inevitable happy ending and actually faces some consequences along the way.
Normally I don't like darker stories but given it's you and the ending probably won't end up being so dark makes it a lot more appealing.
Author's Response:
Yeah Carmen is horrible, with a ton of self serving logic and a mean streak a mile wide. She's got just enough morality in her to keep her from really going over the edge, obviously she's got a long way to go and this is going to end up being a bumpy ride for her.
And yeah this will be a darker story than what I usually write, but it is me, so you don't need to worry that this is going to end like The Mist lol.
Date: November 07 2022 11:17 PM Title: Intertwined
Oh this is gearing up to be amazing. First off, Richard is exactly the kind of character that I love to hate. Just so deplorable for all the right reasons. Hopefully we'll see him shoot himself in the foot somehow, but either way an excellent behind the scenes villian! Second, I was 100% expecting Carmen to be the Valkyrie to get called in to permanently shrink the millionaires. When that didn't happen, I then thought she was certainly going to simply use the permanent shrinking serum on them. But to wind up being posed as their only guardian? Spectacular potential for a very interesting dynamic.
Can't wait to follow along with this one. Well done!!
Author's Response: It's a fun twist, isn't it? She shows up to basically kidnap them and get her revenge and ends up being the only thing in the way of an even worse fate. The relationship between the three of them is obviously about to get even more complicated, glad you're interested!
[Report This]Date: November 07 2022 12:07 AM Title: Prologue: High School
I mean, I was pretty much hooked on this story from the short summary alone. A wonderful concept that I’m very excited to see play out. And after the first two chapters, I’m very eager for more. Terrific start, can’t wait for what’s next
Author's Response:
Thanks, I thought the prologue and the first chapter would be good to upload together.
[Report This]Date: November 07 2022 12:04 AM Title: Prologue: High School
Hi,
it seems I am the first one to leave a review for this story; I definitely have not expected it to be the case, considering how prolific and popular author you have become in such a short time...
The more serious tone of this one is immediately noticable. I have read almost all of your previous works (one exception, if I recall) and a deviation from the light-hearted and goofy installments is actually quite welcome. Do not get me wrong, they are both great and gratly entertaining stories in their own way (and deserve probably 10/10 rating by the standards of this site), but some themes became a bit repetitive, so a change is quite refreshing. Plot-wise it also opens new possibilities, where the readers are presented with difficult and emotional real life problems the protagonists will have to face with more mature mindsets. Anyway, I think you are off to a very solid start and I can only encourage you to treat the further chapters with care as the setting is very promising.
C
Author's Response: I'm glad the more serious tone is sticking, this is going to be a fairly dark one in that everyone here has a lot of stuff they need to work through. I'm trying to branch out a bit, so we'll see how I do with this kind of thing, I'm pretty excited so far!