Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2022 2:40 AM Title: Watch the Quiet Ones

Very interesting story line, and well written. 

I really like the "game" concept so far, and that Saydee has already apparently swallowed one tiny (and vomited their partially digested body out) and crushed another beneath her toe.  The TV news reports of missing persons adding to the idea that these photos are actually real and not some CGI prank is a nice touch.

Keep up the great work.

As to being "inspired by @bonkthetiny on Twitter", it's nice and honorable that you acknowledge this point.  Truth be told, can anybody write a tiny / shrunken or giant / Giantess story without having been influenced by some previous work?  Heck giants are mentioned as far back as "Genesis" in the Old Testament Bible.

We all enjoy each others work in this community, as well as feed off each others ideas only to add to them like the "Interactive Stories" at "Writing.com".  It's more akin to a study group, expanding our knowledge and understanding of a common interest, than taking away from another.  We all benefit in the end.

Still, commendable of you to have mentioned your source of influence.