[Report This]Date: October 28 2022 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 4: The Deal
Great chapter here, and nicely setting up future events.
I can't wait to see what Annabelle is going to get up to now that she has the pills.
Also, would her desires get the better of her? (like she could if she wanted to, force feed Emily a pill to shrink her, and then demand she make more pills/reveal the formula, etc) and then have a constant supply/access to it.
Anyway, fun to imagine what comes next.
[Report This]Date: October 28 2022 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 4: The Deal
I imagine "almond skinned" Officer Annabella Keem looks along the lines of actress Freida Pinto; but that's just my guess.
She has 68 potential tiny prisoners {Blake + 17 + 50 = 68 tinies} to do with as she pleases; and they are basically indestructible for continued use and abuse, even if swallowed. Will Officer Keem open a private prison to house her tinies? What tortures will she put them through?
Great story. I will have to read "Torment on the Tinies", to read more about Emily and her tinies.
A question, will Maya come to accept tinies as permissible; and perhaps want some for her own?
Please keep writing this terrific story.
Author's Response:
Emily doesn't have her own story. Torment of the Tinies is about Megan another woman who gets tinies from Emily though. The pill that she was saving was for her
[Report This]Date: October 26 2022 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Accident
Whoa! What a cliffhanger!
I really like the development of the characters and how you made Blake so despicable, and Maya so loving!
Now I’m ready to see what this officer has in store for Blake! It’s been a while since I’ve read about a giantess cop so this is exciting!
I can’t wait for the next chapter!