[Report This]Date: October 30 2022 10:47 AM Title: Wet Dream
Fantastic so far!
Date: October 30 2022 6:07 AM Title: Wet Dream
This has been pretty nice story so far. I like the fact that Talia started out simply curious about humans but seems to slowly be warming up to them, or Myra at least. Things look small, weak, and easily dismissed at giant size but seems different when at human size and she seems to notice that. At the same time, she still sees herself as superior and has her naughtiness. It's a nice balance between "elves are best!" and "the world is different at this size, humans are interesting"
I hope Talia continues her development as a character but also retains her naughtiness. Also, the parts about her getting embarrassed hearing that humans still her remember her mother's debaucherous youth was funny. And a little chilling if the humans think of elves as apocalyptic. Myra's a fun character, dutiful, heart of justice, getting along well with Talia, and being the growing target of Talia's affections. I'm looking forward to seeing more of these two. :)
[Report This]Date: October 27 2022 10:06 PM Title: Growth
Excellent start! Love the balance between Talia's horny desires and her development as a character. I think its a perfect fit for what I look for in stories on here. These types of powerful gts and interesting and relatively capable normal human are my favorite. I think Myra being unaware was a great place to start and to explore how much Talia can get away with before Myra notices. I'm sure it will be an epic moment. I'm glad Talia already seems to be warming up to her in a real way.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2022 3:24 PM Title: The Great Beast
Strong start. Looking forward to finding out why an elf is finally choosing to show themselves after so long. I'm gonna go out on a limb here and say it probably bodes poorly for humanity!