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Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2022 3:29 AM Title: Losing or winning?

Perhaps a day or so as a tiny for Deci, but perhaps an eternity for little 2 inch tall Graekios kept in a jar in her cabinet.

Calling her out and acknowledging her as his "GODDESS"; does Deci really want to go back to being a simple palace guard or remain her devoted worshiper?

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2022 1:58 AM Title: Fortune favors the...?

Very nice story so far.  Love the part of Bea putting Graekios in a jar and then closing him in her cabinet.

Can't wait to see where this story goes.



Author's Response:

I'm pleased to hear you like it :)

Reviewer: Layston Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2022 6:14 AM Title: Finding where to get lost

Really good so far! Can't wait to see what other ‘games' she has in store for him.

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 15 2022 12:00 AM Title: Finding where to get lost

I get it, "WIP" {Work In Progress}.  With that said, your story is just starting to get interesting. 

Keep working at it.  It has a really nice set up so far, and limitless potential.

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