Reviews For Mom's Mini Couple
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Reviewer: hava Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2024 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Motherly Mind Control

I really loved the start of this story! Hope you go back to it one day!

Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2022 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Motherly Mind Control

Neat idea. Interested to see where it goes. However, the emotes in the text were a little distracting. I think you should trust yourself to convey the emotion in the dialogue without them.



Author's Response:

Hey I'm glad you're interestedal! And thanks for the feedback


In the next chapters I won't be including emotes, and will trust myself to convey emotions through the dialog

Reviewer: Morcw Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2022 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Motherly Mind Control

Awesome story, srsly please do continue.

Reviewer: mjgtsft Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2022 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Motherly Mind Control

I've really enjoyed the beginning of this story! Can't wait to see where this is going ^^

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