Date: October 14 2022 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely incredible to see you back writing again!
Excellent story here and I’ll never get tired of your perfect balance between description and action - keeps everything moving nicely in the most vivid way possible. Also, perfect conclusion for the tiny guy I may or may not be jealous of, despite how foul her sneaker seems to be. And the whole concept behind the drink and all that implies is top tier.
Can’t wait to see more of what you do next, mate!
Author's Response:
You’re incredibly kind and the review is greatly appreciated. And we can all only be so lucky to wind up in the sneaker of gigantic, snarky bartender at the end of her shift. Someday, perhaps.
Thanks so much for reading!!
Date: October 07 2022 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Perfectly crafted Halloween vignette. Well-done!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, the review is very much appreciated. I’m a fan of your writing as well!
Date: October 07 2022 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was a great story. Really enjoyed that way the bartender treated tinys that annoyed costumers, very creative of her
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review. I’m glad you enjoyed it!