Date: October 10 2022 8:42 PM Title: A Little Slice of Devyn
Thank you for exploring the "God" aspect. It isn't used enough. Is Chelsea going to be God moving forward?
Author's Response:
You are quite welcome, I am having a lot of fun with the God concept. And the whether or not Chelsea is actually God or that was just Devyn’s doomed little mind cracking up and playing tricks on her is still a mystery that may or may not be revealed in later chapters >:)
[Report This]Date: October 06 2022 11:12 PM Title: A Little Slice of Devyn
Poor girl, either trapped in the guts of a gluttonous teen or forced to experience the bowels of said teen---death would definitely be a sweeter alternative.
Gotta love some f/f vore though and as always, the writing/dialogue is excellent <3
Author's Response:
The irony is this is the first time I’ve ever actually gone through with full on vore because I always get too attached to the characters to let them get swallowed alive… and then it was so over the top gruesome with no end in sight I was like eesh sorry ‘bout that old girl.
Thanks for reading and commenting, as always (^^)
[Report This]Date: October 05 2022 4:32 AM Title: A Little Slice of Devyn
Holy shit, that ending (?) for chapter 1 was amazing
Author's Response:
Holy shit, indeed 😈. Thanks so much!
Date: October 05 2022 1:11 AM Title: A Little Slice of Devyn
Also, what's Chelsea's hair color? Nice redux btw.
Author's Response:
She has singed straight, mousy brown hair with honey colored highlights. Basically she's basic af
[Report This]Date: October 05 2022 1:05 AM Title: A Little Slice of Devyn
I really like this story! Chubby gts ftw and nice setup. I thought the dialogue was gonna be annoying at first glance but when I actually read it, it was pretty good! Can't wait to see what other stories you plan on making within this town. Also, I'm curious to know what won't you write? Scat? Nose? Watersports? I just wanna know what NOT to expect since I'm cool with everything.
Author's Response:
Thanks! My ideas for future stories so far are mostly all the little snippets I hinted at in the end of the chapter, foot stuff (crowd pleaser), body exploration, probably some insertion and unaware sexy times, stuff like that. I'm not, like, anti any genre, if I were to do more hardcore bodily fluids, it would probably look a bit like the vore scene in this chapter, where it got quite dark and trippy and vile. If that answers your question 😂