[Report This]Date: February 21 2023 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sweet! Yeah I mean I read the sequel loved it too. But would def enjoy some bonus chapters with those two characters and a similar pole scenario lol. If you got the time and inspiration ofc.
[Report This]Date: February 20 2023 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
Just bought both full copies. Gotta say you tapped into some of my biggest fantasies, especially with Liza, Harry, and the pole lol. I truly hope you write additionally chapters featuring those two characters and that room again!
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot man! I'm glad you liked it! The sequel has already reached a conclusion, but bonus chapters for buyers is something I consider!
[Report This]Date: February 03 2023 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 6
I love how Martin and Garrick, also Harry, are falling deeper into Liza's, mommy's adoration than reject or refuse her. Seems mommy Liza desires might be more of what any of them want than they may have realized.
It's nice how any time spent alone with mommy leads to more devotion and lust for Liza. This seems to be something that slaves five through seven may be coming to terms with individually on their own.
The need to begin at her feet, and work up to the rest of Liza's body is a nice concept; but somehow slave five, Harry, seems to have made it that way in the last chapter. Kinda out of script and character of mommy to allow slave five, Harry, to please her between her legs.
Can't wait to find out if Garrick and Martin submit and conform to mommy, or somehow escape her dominance over them.
[Report This]Date: December 18 2022 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
Really great story line, leaving one to wonder where things are going.
Love "Mommy's" slow conversion of her tinies. As much as they wish to escape, the more they seem to be drawn in once she talks with them. Very nicely done.
One of the best stories currently going on here.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words, I'm glad you like it
[Report This]Date: December 04 2022 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
Didn't say this but I really like her plan. It makes a lot of sense and is pretty realistic, especially because they would start associating their orgasms with her.
[Report This]Date: November 27 2022 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Don't know if you realized but in the first chapter you said she had brown eyes but now you say she has violet?
Also love the story so far!
Author's Response:
Brainfart on my end, apologies!
[Report This]Date: November 08 2022 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
So much going on it's hard to follow; yet seems "Mommy" owns the tinies for her use.
[Report This]Date: November 06 2022 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, this latest chapter grabbed my attention!
I love how Liza used all of her slaves to gain full pleasure and it showed how much control she has over them.
Also, it was fun to watch as the other 2 guys were helpless to watch and and see their new fate in front of them.
Lastly, slave 3 is so lucky! He did an absolute job, and I kinda like how she didn’t respond to him when he asked if he did good or not. Clearly, she wanted him to think that he could do better and she’s basically training them to be the best pleasure pets for her.
Great story so far and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: October 16 2022 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
Another great chapter, and this story is getting better and better.
Will she break Garrick's and Martin's wills? How long has Harry, "Slave Five", been her captive? For that matter, how long have they each been her captives? Months? Years? Decades? Centuries?
Liza commands her tinies like a dog owner; are they just trained pets to her?
Liza seems to be a tiny's {like Martin} dream come true.
[Report This]Date: October 01 2022 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice start, and interesting as to why Liza wants them to refer to her as "Mommy" while being her tiny slaves.
Can't wait to see where this story goes.