[Report This]Date: March 11 2024 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
One of my favorite stories!
[Report This]Date: May 25 2023 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
After you started posting “Man of the House”, I checked out your other stories and rediscovered this little gem. After re-reading it, the latter chapters have really started to grow on me. I know you were having some issues coming up with an ending, but I was wondering if you planned to ever actually finish. Maybe you could have Mike start to regrow and have Vicki fulfill her dildo fantasy?
[Report This]Date: November 07 2022 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
This story is fantastic!! Such a perfect setup and plot device for the shrinking. And you do such a great job of setting us up with a protagonist it’s so fun to watch bad luck happen to.
[Report This]Date: November 07 2022 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love the story, especially the Cindy and Doug scenes.
[Report This]Date: November 07 2022 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 17
Really great story. There was plenty of setup, it didn't feel rushed, and it didn't feel like a slog. Still hoping to see more of Vicky, hopefully a lot more, and hoping to see Michelle continue with her revelation that she could use Mike to basically make giantess content for a while, all the while Mike continues to get messed with by Cindy and Doug. Absolutely fantastic.
Where this story falls off is that the characters started out very believable, but turned into tools for smut fiction all too quickly. I would have liked to see more realistic, reasonable behavior from all of them. We saw how much Cindy loved Mike and supported him, even through the disappointment of his size changing, but she took revenge so nonsensically quickly without even a word to him. From the way she had been written up until that point, I very much expected her to ask him about it first and mostly believe him when he said it was his sister.
I also would have liked to see more emotion from Mike. Through all the betrayal, all the pain, the only thing he ever shows is anger. With all he was going through, I really wanted to see him show genuine sadness and sorrow to his sister about the way she was treating him, and for her to open up a bit to him and feel really sorry for the way she was abusing her own brother.
We're here now though, and I'm not upset about it. What I want to see from the rest of this story is, first, all the things from my first paragraph. Then I'd love to see Mike grow back and seek the death penalty for all of them, if not simply kill them himself, as well as that company clearly abusing human rights to go down. With the way Mike is written, and the utter, inhuman terror they submitted him to out of fucking nowhere, I wouldn't be surprised if he grew back, immediately bought a weapon, and just murdered them all. He gets arrested for murder and sentenced to prison, and from the information made public through the trial, the company gets taken down and the doctors arrested.
Anyways, that's my take. Can't wait for me, no matter what you do with it. It's all good fun. :)
[Report This]Date: October 16 2022 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love humiliation as much as anyone but I hope the sister will help him out. You kinda set it up with him punching out a creeper in one of the earlier chapters.
[Report This]Date: October 16 2022 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wow. I'm loving every second of this story.
[Report This]Date: October 11 2022 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm still surprised that Michelle is still teasing him to give him the train because if he shrinks too much then he'll be useless for the research plus you should make it worth Vicky actually does something to Michelle to make you know Michael's words hey stay away from her she's bad news be right and then she feels kind of bad because even though he was a dick when he was taller he was still a big brother and protected her and tried to get her to like bulk up to defend herslef
[Report This]Date: October 11 2022 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm really glad I read this series. It was not on the description but I'm happy that there are more scenarios between Mike and Michelle. Really love the teasings. Keep it up
[Report This]Date: October 11 2022 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
Now that he's this small I'd love to see his sister trap him on one of her thongs. Make him realize how small he is just a piece of string between his sisters ass. And if you'd want to use it as an ending have him shrink to nothing from being mad while on it ;)
Date: October 11 2022 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 15
I like Vicky's Onlyfans idea. I hope Michelle starts taking pictures and videos of dominating tiny Mike to make extra money. After all, Mike needs to "contribute" to the house and answering internet requests can be very lucrative. Michelle is already dominating Mike, so broadcasting it will help to pay the bills. It should at least be fun for Michelle.
Date: October 08 2022 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
It depends what type of eating if you want a good ending for the main character have it where eventually he grows back but he's a nicer person he doesn't get angry as quickly with his sister or he has like deep thoughts in his head about how his sister treated him and maybe have the sister feel bad for him and basically take care of him since she's working at that company and probably making a lot of money another thing you could have him grow back to maybe like 5 ft because you shrink too much and then it also have you know his sister take care of him cuz she feels bad cuz she's responsible for it
If you want a bad ending beer we're basically he can't grow back at all and he's got to live with all the other little males a plot twist could be his girlfriend a forgives him because she realized that he was basically taking advantage of and he lives with her in her dorm
A bad ending could be where you just make him a slave to his sister because of the way it's going now his girlfriend doesn't want anything to do with them he's too small for Vicky
Date: October 08 2022 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
First I'd like to know how his sister knew that he got blown by his ex second is going to be interesting when he's like that small how his sister's going to react is she going to tell his girlfriend the truth that was her fault and I wonder how she'll feel if he was stuck like that forever and I wonder if he would even want to live like that I'm surprising out of the shrunk and then have tried to kill themselves
Author's Response:
Sister didnt know about the BJ, but she knew something happened because he had shrunk even more.
[Report This]Date: October 08 2022 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
I should have put this in my last review but I really like the big brain move at the end to knock himself out
[Report This]Date: October 08 2022 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like where this is going! Awesome story
[Report This]Date: October 08 2022 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
Getting good
Date: October 08 2022 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
hopefully someone saves him... and he's not too small for Vicky >:D This is an amazing premise and story so far!
[Report This]Date: October 07 2022 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
Another awesome story by ittybittyman!
[Report This]Date: October 06 2022 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Need to see more giant male Humiliation like in chapter 10! Great story so far!
Date: October 03 2022 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really like the setting. The sister and girlfriend are great. but it’s way too slow with the shrinking
Author's Response:
Don't worry, it'll speed up soon