Reviews For A Mouse in Love
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Reviewer: NymphOManiac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2022 8:11 PM Title: A Mouse in Love

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I laughed out loud at Aimee's rehearsed seduction on the pillow, as well as Jack's complete obliviousness when she attempts to charm him 😂

The sleepily unaware was fun, I like how he does hear her and feel her struggling around beneath him but he's just too out of it to think anything of it.

I request more, please! I'm dying to see Jack's reaction to learning of the terrors he's unwittingly subjected upon his beloved wife!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words! Definitely have alot of potential ideas in my back pocket. Always thinking about how much I could push unaware Jack and what else could be subjected upon his tiny wife before he learns the truth.

Reviewer: itty_bitty_face_of_putty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2022 6:04 AM Title: A Mouse in Love

Lovely read! The best laid schemes of mice and men, right? I certainly will be in the category of those who would enjoy the next story beat or two if you ever did decide to continue. Thank you for writing this and sharing it!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the kind words!

Reviewer: Kooplan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2022 5:59 AM Title: A Mouse in Love

Love a good "plans going horribly wrong" type of story, and you illustrate each step of Aimee's unfortunate downward spiral to perfection! If you do plan to continue, I would 100% be down to see more of Aimee's failures at her shrunken size!


Perhaps she makes it out of her current predicament and all the way back to the antidote, only to find her husband is pouring it down the drain of their bathroom sink for whatever reason? Anything to keep her tiny, but that's just a suggestion~



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! Definitely imagining more trouble would keep befalling her to keep her at tiny size. Even thought about potentially her getting shrunk down even more too, but unsure exactly where that should go yet. Thanks for the suggestions!

Reviewer: Da Boss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2022 5:15 AM Title: A Mouse in Love

Really like the story and your descriptive writing!  Nicely done, my friend! 



Author's Response:

Thank you again! :)

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