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Reviewer: angelus288 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2022 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

This story is one big block of text. If you don't put it in paragraphs, no one is going into read it. 

And why are some words much larger than others?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback! Looks like the formatting got broken on import. Should be fixed now! 

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