[Report This]Date: September 20 2022 4:16 AM Title: A Weekend Together
Holy shir
Allison is a phenomenal character, her taunting is just perfect, and self-imduced shrinking via the panties was a superb creative twist
Her climaxing to the roleplay of him disappearing into her garment was fantastic, just goddamn brilliant
Thanks for sharing your works GA
Author's Response:
I like Allison as a nervous and somewhat shy girl who really lets herself get wild around Clark, as they joke many of her fantasies are "evil" lol, we'll obviously see more of them as the story progresses.
[Report This]Date: September 19 2022 12:18 PM Title: Bumping into Each Other
Drake and Vasquez, hmm? x) Wonder if they also wield smartguns...
Anyway, lovely writing as always!
Author's Response:
Yeah you might say they were in the marines together lol. Glad you're enjoying the new story.
Date: September 18 2022 9:14 PM Title: Bumping into Each Other
Will Sadie be in F/fm type of action? Rather than seeing another giantess, having companion on your tiny adventures is better. If you ask to be shrunken once, you should do it again.
Hoping not to see gene replication technology. Although it would be fun to see some power hungry woman trying to get the gene only to get shrunken to 6 inches or so for life.
Maximum the government can do without causing too much harm is making some temporary shrinking serum at the end of the story.
Author's Response:
Sadie will be in F/f and other types of action too, obviously she was shrunk before and she'll end up shrunk again, even if it's been years at this point in the story. As for what causes Allison's condition it will be explored a little bit, they don't necessarily want to replicate her genes just replicate the ability in any form.
[Report This]Date: September 18 2022 8:41 PM Title: The First Date
So theres a conspiracy on, of course they would completely do that.
Author's Response:
Yep they've been watching Allison from the shadows for a long time now.
Date: September 18 2022 6:53 AM Title: Bumping into Each Other
Also, Sadie is quite kinky. It would be interesting to see her in action.
Author's Response:
We will get to see Sadie in action.
Date: September 18 2022 6:23 AM Title: Bumping into Each Other
Inconsistency:
She's not a man-shrinking mutant. She can shrink both sex. Also, does it work on animals? Insects? Not having to worry about mosquitos anymore is sure cool.
Author's Response:
She calls herself a "man-shrinking mutant as a kind of offhand remark, she does shrink women as well. Also yes it does work on animals and insects, but they can sense the chemical that causes the shrinking and will do what they can to avoid her or her victims. Call that great minds think alike because I have that particular detail about the mosquitos and ticks written in my notes lol, it's kind of a minor plot point in a later chapter but not a huge spoiler.
[Report This]Date: September 17 2022 8:18 PM Title: Bumping into Each Other
Oh yeah, I remember your greentext, and quality as expected of you!
Lets see where you take this this time.
Author's Response:
This one will have more of a structured plot than the greentexts did, and more of a conflict, but I think the spirit of what made those enjoyable will carry over.
[Report This]Date: September 17 2022 2:17 PM Title: Bumping into Each Other
i love your down to earth storys . I cant wait too see more from you.
Author's Response:
Thanks, this one should be fun.
Date: September 17 2022 7:44 AM Title: Bumping into Each Other
Can you mention height? At least for Clark and Allison
Author's Response:
I'll be sure to include it next chapter but for now
Clark 5' 10"
Allison 5' 4"
Sadie 5' 4"
Brick 6' 2"
Angie 5' 1"
Date: September 17 2022 7:30 AM Title: Bumping into Each Other
I was scrolling for good new stories, not looking at the author and when I pick something interesting based on description:
It's you again. What a surprise. How are you writing so much good stuff?
Author's Response:
I do my best lol. I have a lot of stories I'd like to do at some point sitting as outlines on my HD and I like to try different story structures out. Hope this one ends up being good!
Date: September 16 2022 10:41 PM Title: Bumping into Each Other
OH YES!~!! I remember reading your green texts that you posted here and this is DEFINITELY my favorite of them!!! Can't wait to see a fleshed out full version!
Author's Response: I've been wanting to do a full novelization attempt on them for a while now, it's just a concept I really like. Hope you enjoy it!